Chapter 1: Ghash!!!! When you posted to my wall ... I was like 'oh okay...whatever it is' thought and now you made me cry!! >///< in agood way of course =)) ghash you're so good ;-; i think im related to this story even though i dont have a boyfriend but still youre so great and you're the first ever author to make me cry even its still starting (i mean when im starting to read it im already crying and idk why maybe because im reading this while listening to exo's christmas day) DAMN! i have no more to say since i really can't explain things very well Great Job ! (y)

Chapter 1: wow. Wow. WoW. woW. WOW!
That was good. I love stories when Sehun gets jealous. He is just cute >\\< I love your story! It was DAEBAK! You found the right person to read your Sehun ff! Love your story! <3 <3 <3 I'm glad DAEBAKyou came to my wall and asked me if I could read story! I love Sehun Oppa!!!!

Chapter 1: eeeep this is so adorable. i have a thing for jealous!sehun and also an extreme soft spot for him ^ w ^ i liked how chaeri got sidetracked by lay, and seemed to be entirely oblivious about how sehun would feel-- it was a good addition as to how their relationship was developing. although, i caught a number of grammatical errors along the way, it didn't distract me as much from the storyline. but u should still be careful of those kind of errors. nevertheless, i was intrigued on how u would conclude their relationship, and i was quite captivated until the story finished. i was half expecting sehun to move on, find another girl and perhaps text chaeri months later about his new relationship, and when sehun suddenly appeared towards the end, i was like wh O A surprise ~ surprise ~ sehuns back ~ it was rly cute how sehun expressed his more affectionate side to chaeri, telling her that he truly missed her and that he loved her. it was a smooth finish to the rough situation that they were experiencing. whoop! in conclusion, u did good mate