Chapter 1: this oneshot is awesome!!
you make my cry..
I love the sad ending..
you know..I'm little bit weird..because I like sad endings more than happy ending..
And actually I am looking for YiXing's ff..Gladly..I found it..My 2nd's bias ff!
thank you sooOoO much!
kisses and hugs for you *wink*

Chapter 1: As much as I want to say that the girl was so stupid for drinking the poison cup! It was so sadly romantic with the whole she did it for Lay because he would have killed himself after killing the girl's grandfather! I kind of hope there is an alternative ending where lay gets eunjoo to the hospital and she returns to life, dramatically. About the whole grandfather thingy, I think he should go on a guilty trip you know suffer from causing Lay some problems as an aftermath..anyway good job on the oneshot, authornim!!