The Not So Shocking Adventures of the Calitexas State College Baseball-Viewing Club

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Nov. 2014: Still outlining. At this point, I'm determined to finish this in some fashion, but who knows when that will be. I'm taking it off of super-dramatic official hiatus, since the situation has pretty much settled down at this point.

Chapter 11 is not new story - basically just  the DVD extras for Part 1.

Amber was just your average obsessed-with-baseball college sophomore. Kris was just your average former high school baseball star whose promising career was interrupted by a terrible car accident. I, Krystal Jung, was just the friend who got to watch them be complete idiots about everything.

A random college-themed AU. The story of Amber Liu's love life, as narrated by Krystal Jung.  Heavily features baseball fandom. I know today's idols aren't really into baseball, but I am, so this is what happens. I'm not great at updating frequently, but I do have a fairly detailed plotline, so I probably won't get lost 6 chapters in. Definitely has a Hana Kimi/To the Beautiful You flavor, but without the disguised as a boy plot point. Also, I think there's a small Bend it Like Beckham aspect. And maybe a little Bull Durham.

-Mainly Krisber, with a Henber love triangle

-Side Kaistal

-Really really side Chanli

-Possible other pairings

-Calitexas State College does not exist. (Obviously)

-Any specific baseball games referenced herein will be fictional, though the players and teams are all real.

- The ages are squished up to get everyone at a reasonable college age. 

Author's Thoughts
rockpaperscissors
I think I'm done with chapter 8, actually, but it's so horrible and depressing, I want to have ch 9 almost finished before I post it.
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ladyhaemi #1
Chapter 10: Holy crap I love this story. You are hilarious, author. Tom Jones? Really? And I've never taken a second look at Krystal before, but you made her voice so real and funny and snarky that I wish your Krystal was real! :) Can't wait for Part 2.
WatashiwaTsuyoi #2
Chapter 4: Luna ships hunber is a fabulous plot and luna ships krisber and being such a great love master is another perfectly fabulous plot lol me likey. Luna baby let's be <shipping> friends shall we? ;)

This fic gives me some of my shipping feels without feeling 'amber is such a pimp' feels at all. Krisber Henber Hunber. Plus all of the characters here are so adorbs. And still love your narator krysjung ;)

Oh, once more before i gone
"Also, making henry sad makes me sad :("
Whoah congrats author, you dont just break snoopy's heart, but also mine fyi.

Yep, gonna continue.
WatashiwaTsuyoi #3
Chapter 1: Okay so, what i wanna say first is, your Kryatal's POV is amazing! And the Krystal's "Me! The amazing one, who's amazing at everything. Obviously." full of herself intro is such a perf! lol

I really am happy to read this coz first, i always want to see this kind of plot. I mean, kryber as the love-hate BESTIES where each of them had a boyfriend and krystal jung the diva liked to ing about amber's (love)life, in a good way ofc.

Second, im a fan of f(x) and i like krisber but sometimes krisber story (not much ofc, only few of them) makes krystal look like a completely annoying betch and its jz hard for me reading it since i love the other fx's members as well.

Okay now to the story. The story is somehow like the american sitcom i guess. Its funny and fresh (and i think it was bcoz of your amazing Krys' POV), and i cant help but giggles at the cute dumb puppies called hunber. And honestly, i would like to see sehun ended up w krys. No, that doesnt mean im a sestal shipper (hell i ship krys w me lol jk) but a diva aka princess with a dumb puppy boy probably will be adorkable to see but well, maybe after read the next chapters that thoughts will chance bcoz of kaistal, wont it? :P

Oh wow, i had commeted this long oh my im sorry for puting such a fruckin long thoughts here coz the thing that i just read was just amazing and i cant help it lol. Gonna continue after class ofcourse. And i will try to not comment this long again coz i know its anoying to see lol :p
Okay then, see ya! :)
--yeseuri #4
Chapter 11: OMG Your timeline xD
Actually, the notes helped me a lot, especially in understanding how Kris felt in certain parts of the story when I couldn't really tell because, afterall, Krystal is the one telling the story and she can only go so far in trying to really understand how the protagonists feels.
I'm just waiting for the start of part 2 now.
ShidaM #5
Chapter 11: Your notes are just as entertaining as the story itself. WHAT IS THIA SORCERY?!? ! J/k!! I shall patiently await the next chapter! <3
ajol_fxonee #6
Chapter 10: Nice ending, but glad to know that she choose kris than henry! Coz,at first I thought that she goes to boston with henry hahaha.. KrisBer over HenBer!!! I think KrisBer more strong than anyber pairing that exist...
How can it happen??? I hope its REAL ^_^
jyrasaurus #7
Chapter 10: That was the grandest confession of all time. It's freaking cheesy and over the top but umf IT'S SO GOOD I LOVE IT.
And seeing this whole thing through Krystal's eyes is an amazing idea and I'm going to applaud you for that every time. It was so fluffy but angsty and funny all at the same time. I shall wait patiently for Part 2 hehehe
--yeseuri #8
Chapter 10: When I read she was going to Boston, I freaked out for a bit there, like "WTF is she REALLY running away from the situation?"
Then she surprises Kris with the whole band and roses and flash mob thing, and I knew everything will be alright.
I take back what I said; Amber has also done everything and more at this point.
And really, Krystal represents the whole entire Krisber shipping Armada.
I hope she looks after that video well so she can play it on their wedding day, on their silver anniversary and on their gold anniversary.
justmeyay #9
Chapter 10: brave & cool
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