Plot:

-          No overal plot, but you had already explained that in your description.

13/30 points

English:

-    Great English.

28/30 points

Creativity:

-          A very interesting and smart type of story by allowing your reader to pick who the leading male was.

10/10 points

Description and Title:

-         The title is interesting and it isn't one that is used often. 
Your description is okay seeing as you don't have an overal plot.

7/10 points

Writing style:

-          So far the writing style is easy to follow along.
There isn't a flow to it seeing as it is random scenes

6.5/10 points

Enjoyment:

-       Overall, an enjoyable story with twist and turns at each update.  

7/10 points

Star Rating: 3 1/2 stars.
Total Mark: 71 1/2

The idea of the story is really good. It isn't something you see very often. Being able to decide on which male get's the leading role is one of the most smartest ideas I have seen on AFF. It means you are able to cater to everyone's need. Overall, this is an enjoyable series of scenes.

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