Chapter 1: what she said ↓ xD

Chapter 1: Interesting approach to take for a story. I rather like how Minhyun's writing it as we're reading it, though his subject matter is certainly dark for class setting. lol I certainly felt bad for the Jonghyun in his book though. Ouch.

You definitely captured the abused part of his character very well. It was painful but realistic the way it followed him even after he got free and the way in which he had to convince himself to actually follow through with his plan. There was a part in the middle where I was briefly confused since Minhyun was writing in his book but the paragraph wasn't italicized and thought there were two Jonghyun's in the story but upon closer inspection, I figured out what the concern was.

The parallel part you chose to pick the actual meeting was nigh on perfect though. It definitely made me smile. The last line was beautiful too. ^_^ Very good ending and the overall story line was pleasant to read. You do have some typos and tense changes throughout but nothing that actually interferes with comprehending the story. Good job.

Chapter 1: Oh my God... It's so... I don't know...
I can't say anything ._.v
um it's so wonderfull! Ugh I love it author-nim!
Keep writing another JRMin story later ;)
hwaiting! ^^

Chapter 1: Ohmygod, i don't even have words.... Love it!!

I have recommended this in The Library. This is a gem <3

Omg thank you so much :D<3 thank you thank you <3

Chapter 1: I am the judge of Weavers of Words and I wanted to drop by and say that I have now read your story <3

I really adore this; the final line nearly brought tears to my eyes. This is a great re-telling <3

AND your poster/background are beautiful!!!