A Window On The Back Of My Hand

Description

Jonghyun gets a strange kind of anxiety whenever he thinks about living among the mass of people in a big city. Kibum notices his state of emotion one night and tries to talk to him about it. But their opinions on what Jonghyun is missing are different.

Pairing: Jongkey

Genre: teenage!angst, fluff, gen

Jonghyun's POV

set during debut days

Foreword

English is not my first language, but mikakii beta'd this fanfiction. Thank you!

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elliptical #1
congrats x
HildaZ
#2
Chapter 1: man its so good
4ranghae
#3
Chapter 1: ahhh wtf this was so beautiful
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(yeah, i'm your random subscriber who is reading all your stories... Dont mind me hahaha)
KuroAkuma
#4
Your work is well written and satisfying. I like the characters being rewarded with happy endings.
MyDearKyoKun #5
This is very deep and meaningful like all of your other stories <3<br />
Keep up the good work, you have a faithful reader in me! XD
AmeKami #6
I totally agree with the fan stuff. It's like we can see a black box, some notice the lines in the wood, some see the way the color change but we can't see what's inside the box. We can believe it's a pen or a piece of jewelry but unless we look we won't ever know.<br />
I love SHINee, I love Jonghyun's voice, Onew's chicken obsession, Taemin's way to interact with the big cute frog (Minho) and how they all seem to know so much about one other. Most of all I think I love Key's "mother" relationship with Taemin, probably because that's how I would have treated him, and he's 1 year older than me and 2 cm longer.<br />
I loved this story, you kinda wrote things I sit and think about when I can't sleep and listen to sad SHINee cuz they always make me feel like I'm not alone about feeling alone. <br />
Thank you for the wonderful story and cute jongkey. Sorry this got so long.
keydongho93
#7
I disagree with jjong's thought "They don’t even know me, so how can they say that they love me?" hehe<br />
You should use pink thread, key :)<br />
Nice story ^^
WinterRose
#8
This story is so deep and emotional...I like it ^^ It's a change from teh usual fluff that people write about.
Climentine
#9
Wow it was really good! Deep I'd say. <br />
I love the part with the light - "Behind two of them the lights are switched on. There are countless reasons why the people in those apartments are not sleeping in the dead of night, but I’ll never know. I can only observe that the lights are currently on." , it made me think ^^^<br />
You have some good ideas here! Keep writing ^^^