When they were in L.A. [a one-shot from Tomoki one-shot series]

Description

When Maki decides to bring Tomoki to L.A. and she bumps into a "stranger" ... 

Foreword

An overly worried Toma STALKS Maki and Tomoki as they head off for their trip to L.A., without Yamapi. 

And they coincidentally met someone else.... and this made Toma very worried for Pi...

 

Who is he? And what will Toma do to help Pi? 

 

More Tomoki <3 from the author~ 

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hanmie7227 #1
hey~<br />
how could I missed this!!!<br />
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XDDDDDDDDD<br />
frankly, I can't stop myself from reading your story<br />
very interesting~<br />
and how I could not stop smiling and grinning all myself<br />
Love Toma so much, especially when stalked Maki jin in los angeles<br />
keh keh keh<br />
thanks for sharing this wonderful stories
fayers #2
@proximaC: It's okay for the long comment, in fact, I loved it!! (: I enjoyed reading your comment too, thank you ^_^ LOLS @ the Jin part.. awesome, handsome, bakanishi? hahas. :D I wish jin would go back to Japan and there would at least be a jinxmaki if not a yamaki. yes!!! I love watching them in cartoon kat-tun too, Jin looked like he had a crush on Maki and the way Maki relate him to scrap, of how her friend paste his photo on the back of a chair made me wonder if Maki did crush on him like her friend...(you know, sometimes friends' influence? xD) hmm, that's a good question, if they were together... (and I see a very Jealous Pi at the side... silently seething...) LOLS, you're looking forward to more JinxMaki here?? Ops, I am more inclined towards Yamaki.... but I could try, anyway I love imagining a jealous pi xD thank you for liking this one-shot (: (hmm... we could wait a few more years and hope for it to be true! whoops.. I hope I am not giving too much false hope..) Same here, I miss miss miss the good old KAT-TUN days too, I still hold on to that hope that Jin will go back .. one day.
proximaC #3
I enjoyed reading this...<br />
Funny and entertaining and a total chaos...toma and nakatsu are definitely one...he's so paranoid...<br />
and yamapi being yamapi...cool and sweet at the same time...weee~<br />
jin...well since he's my bias, I'm gonna have to say he's AWESOME and of course handsome :P<br />
jinxmaki is such a rare combination don't you think? i love watching him as he teased maki in one of the cartoon kat-tun episode...so sweet...<br />
not many story on this pair since they never worked together...<br />
but i wonder...how would it be it they were together?<br />
jin being dorky and cool while maki-chan being sweet and shy...<br />
ah looking forward to read more on them actually...<br />
because I'm curious of how the author will develop their characters and relationship...<br />
This one is nice...~ I like it...<br />
I wish everything was true...<br />
Yay Jin for his 27th birthday...I miss the good, old KAT-TUN...<br />
All six of them...oh it brought back memories when they're happily together during Cartoon KAT-TUN... :)<br />
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Oppps sorry for the long comment...
fayers #4
hahas! thank you so much for all the comments once again, dears :D <br />
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@MountainTree: Did I tell you I really love your nick before? hehehes... mountaintree!! yamaki!! hmms... the one in the train scene... where he saw Maki? I didn't really describe it so as to let your own imagination flow (well, it's actually because I love all the funny disguises and I couldn't decide, hehes) ~ Yep, he's a paranoid freak here, it somehow reminds me of his role in Hana Kimi, hahahahas. <br />
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@egathia: YEA! I thought of how he is acting so baka now... but then again, he's being more paranoid than baka-ish.. at least he has some sense to book the tickets and get a visa card, hahahas! well, I guess Yamapi has lots of baka friends around him ^_^
egathia #5
It's so cute <3<br />
Lol Toma. He should be given a nickname 'Bakatoma' as well XD<br />
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MountainTree
#6
this was so fun and cute! hahaha!<br />
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love that Jin used Pi's disguises! <br />
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I kept imagining the one Pi used in the train scene :))<br />
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TOMA is so lovable! what a paranoid friend! at least he cares XD<br />
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OTANJOBI OMEDETOU JINJIN AND MASSU!