REVIEW
Heechul's diaryStory (18/20)
Semi-original. Entertaining but there were several problems.
Plot (15/20)
The idea behind it was great but there are things that kind a mess it up.
Characters (16/20)
Since its a oneshot, they were ok. The reader could easily tell what the relationship between the characters was.
Overall Originality (17/20)
Story + Plot + Characters = authentic story. Nice story
Pacing (3/10)
It was rushed! This story could've been made into a story of about 5 or 6 chapters. Sorry, but everything seemed half finished.
Grammar & Spelling (4/10)
There were mistakes through out the entire story.There were a few misspelled words here and there, but most of the mistakes consisted of tense shifting.
Final Grade: 73%
-The idea behind the story was a good but the story was rushed to make it fit into one chapter and, consequently, the pacing of the story was messed up. Also, there were a lot of mistakes and this ruined the flow of the story. Fix this and I assure you, your story can be perfect! =P
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Thanks to Lala1901 for review
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