Breaking At Night

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Hey guys! This is Luhan's P.O.V. If you haven't read the part 1, please do read it first so you will get the flow of the story.

In The Stillness I Hear His Voice:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/535863/in-the-stillness-i-hear-his-voice-angst-seohyun-luhan-kris-seohan-acebaby

 

Thank youuu :D

Thank you again exseo for yet another great poster! :D /shots

 

 

Foreword

First off, I want you guys to know I made a poem for ACE BABIES!! *confetti
I know it's lame but at least I tried. ;) This is how I see Luhan, his fail attempt on getting Seohyun's attention.
The way he stares at her when she's passing by. Okay.. Can you guys comment below what have you noticed in the poem? XD



Here She Goes

 

Abruptly my heart started beating fast.

Clumsily I fell for her like this won’t last.

Enigmatic feeling hit me like a blast.

 

Beseeched her, my heart waits in vain.

Always will, even though it rain.

Besotted by her presence.

Intoxicated by her existence.

Enchanted by her beauty.

Stealthily I would look at her again.

 

Slowly, she would pass by.

Here I am, just wanted to say Hi.

I stopped on my track and attempt a try.

Pathetic, I could only sigh.

 

Secretly my eyes would always follow her.

Everywhere she goes I‘d watch like a creeper.

Oblivious still, will I just write her a letter?

Heart’s not wavering and so it will fonder.

As sweet as a flower, as light as a feather.

Nothing would stop me, soon I would steal her.


 

 

a/n: please don't criticize it. XD Btw, can someone make a poster for this story? :D

Comments

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pinkhanbokgirl
#1
Chapter 1: Ahhh Luhan's point of view... this is so sad )): Anyway, it was well written and I love your poem as well! :D
Eycha_sk11 #2
Chapter 1: Woww, i love ur poem! Poor baby luhan... Waiting for seokris ! Hwaiting!
ilabya5 #3
nice poem~
illuxians
#4
OMGGG THIS IS A GOOD POEM <3 I LOVE IT ;;;
MorningStar_
#5
hahaha. THAT SHOULD BE LUHAN'S POEM TO SEOHYUN!

zarina pls! hahaha