Chapter 1: You're an amazing writer I had to say. I can't stand gore (note that I said GORE, I can't stand vixx's too.) And yours, though is literal, still, I can feel, I mean imagine the cutting scene there. You're a great writer. I cringes you know, feeling the pain you tried to express.
Chapter 1: Woooowww... I dont fully understand the ending part where she cuts herself? But its so sad, and depressing. I like the way you write the parts 'theres a pill for that'. :D
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