First Time I Saw You

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Hey ! so this is kinda like first time i wrote a story, lol..
 
Foreword : 
Baekhyun and kai was a lovely couple, what happen when they become busier?
 
Rating : Angst ? PG 13 ? 
 
comment and critic please hehe
 
Oh and this is based on the true story, but the real person who act as Baekhyun is not dead 
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keepdreaming #1
Chapter 1: it's good, but it's much better if you could focus on the grammatical tense. Like for example, you have to choose between past tense, present tense or future tense.


You tried, so well done~
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