The Best Ever

Description

Donghae is in LA and he's walking down the street late at night with Kyuhyun and Sungmin. They are about to go into a restaurant but they hear some girl yelling and slaps! They follow the sound and find a guy hitting his girlfriend! They go to save her. What is going on?? 

Foreword

It is my first fic and i want to thank to Taemins_LittleNoona for asking me to write this fic for her. Thanks Unnie!!!! 

Please, lovely readers be easy with me. I hope all of you love this oneshot. Please, leave a comment if you do and if you don't, tell me about it. Thank you!!!! Enjoy it!!! ^_^

Comments

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Mizuki1987
#1
Thank you guys for all your comments, subscribers and silent readers!!!! I hope all of you enjoyed reading this oneshot!!!

Thanks mermaid_monkey13 for telling me the mistakes, like i sayd before, it was a Microsoft Word mistake. I changed hyun for hyung and the program also changed the hyun in Kyuhyun. But I corrected all. Thank you again!!!!
mermaid_monkey13 #2
Chapter 1: the story is great... you have a potential to be a good author. Maybe you need more basic korean words to know like the name of the members
KYUHYUN without G
Hyung with single G
and somewhat you give me an Idea for my Donghae fiction .... HWAITING!!!!
sayurimei
#3
Chapter 1: Wow.. Really love it, i enjoy the ending so much, keep it up author-nim!
HanaLoveSHae
#4
Chapter 1: Great job! ^^ I really liked it a lot! You should definitely write more stories! You're very good at it!!! :)
ParkJimins_TinyWifey #5
Chapter 1: SOO CUTE!!! I LOVED IT!! :D Grea job, girly!^^
ParkJimins_TinyWifey #6
Chapter 1: *Spazzes* AHHHH MY DONGHAE FEELSSSSSSSSSSSSS! LOL! Okay, okay I gotta calm down! I am gonna read now!!! EEEP! :D