Chapter 1: That was really one of thes sweetest ff's I've ever read. I don't know if it's the simplicity or the pace or the two combined but it all worked out to be brilliant.
Thanks for that.
Chapter 1: That was really one of thes sweetest ff's I've ever read. I don't know if it's the simplicity or the pace or the two combined but it all worked out to be brilliant.
Thanks for that.
Chapter 1: Ohh this is beautiful, it really is! I positively adore the little introduction. It seemed so crisp, clear and yet stood out so well! The little monologue to begin with really set the pace for the story! And I absolutely love the ending as well. I swore I sighed a little when I read the last line. Beautiful story! Good job!
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