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His Promise (Sequel of My Sustitute Boyfriend)
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Author's POV     Luhan is currently at his friend's house, Kris... He doesn't feel to sleep at their house because of what happen last night... Kris' house is kinda big, with 3 rooms and a guest room where Luhan slept.   Kris woke up very early because of last night. He's also invited at the party because his parents are working at Luhan's parents. He can't sleep because he's drunk last night.. Later on as he was siiping his coffee, someone knock on his door.         "Hmmm.. Who could this be--"     "Wheres my Luhan?!!!!"       And i'ts Chorong... She knew that Luhan sleep there because she contacked his mother..     "And who the hell are you---"     "Out of my way! LUHAN!!!!!"     "Hey!!! you-- aww!"     Kris couldn't run because his hot coffee spill at his wrist... Chorong hurriedly went to the guest room and she found him there... still sleeping.. She jump at Luhan's bed and hugged him...     "LULU OPPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"     "WHAT THE---- CHORONG?!"     "Goodmorning OPPA!!!"     "Hey get out!!!!! Can't you give me some privacy?!!!!"     "What do you mean??? I'm your fiancee afterall.. And-- ohhh.. your phone???"     "He-hey!!! Give that back!!!"     Chorong move and started to look at Luhan's photos..     "Hmmm.. booooooooooring!!! Always yoona yoona yoona!!"     "I'm warning you Chorong!!!"     Luhan can't get out of his bed and remove his blanket because he's just wearing his boxers...  And it would be awkward for both of them if he try to get his phone from her.   "Delete all!"     0_____________0     "What?! You deleted it all?!"     "Uhhmm?? Obviosly?? And oh I'm gonna delete also... and yeah... this folder entitled FAWN COUPLE!"     >:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((       Meanwhile...........     Kris is washing his wrisk in the kitchen when someone also knock on the door...     "Aish... Why so early!!! huh-- Yoona?!"     "Goodmorning! Uhmm.. Is Luhan awake??? He texted me last night that he's here... I bought some breakfast for him"     "Err... Uhmmm.. He-s----"   "Handsssss ooooooooffff alreadyyyy!!!!!" "Aaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiii!!!" "Giveeeeeeeeeeee meeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!"     "Is that Luhan??? W-whos with him???"     "Ahh... It's not-- I mean Luhan is-- Wait!!! Yoona!"     Yoona hurriedly went to the guest room and she was so surprise of what she saw.. Luhan is on the top of Chorong wearing only his boxers..     Yoona- "L-Luhan???"         Luhan- "Yoona?!"     Kris- "Yoona wait-- 0_____0 Luhan??!!"     Yoona hurriedly go and she was very hurt of what she had seen there.. She knew that Luhan is honest with her but it was just so hard for her to believed that she caught him in that situation.. She was running away from there... with tears in her eyes.. She's already at the nearby bus stop and when she look back... She realize that Luhan didn't bother to follow her..     "W-why Luhan did this to me??? He did'nt even bother to follow me to explain??! How could you Luhan!"     Meanwhile @ Kris' house....   Luhan: "Yoona wait!!!!!!"   Chorong: "Oppa!!!! Kajima"   Luhan: "Let go of me!!!"   Chorong: "NO! Why are so fr*akin d*mn obssessed with that girl huh??!! I'm here oppa.. I'm here for you... please let it me... just me..."   Luhan: "You can never be Chorong.. NEVER!"   And then he gets his things and left... He thought Yoona is still to be found but she left... When he reached the main gate of the house, Kris held his wrist..   "Luhan wait!"     "What?!"     "Where you think you're going????"     "I'm going to follow Yoona.. I'll explain her--"     "If I were you, I wont"     "What??!
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saseumi90 #1
Chapter 4: Omg luyoon is soooooo sweet ><
nice fanfic
keep writing..
Eyesmiler
#2
omaygasssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!! this is the best LuYoon fanfic I've read!!!! asdfghjkl
aprisa_pratiwi #3
Chapter 4: i like this story very must ^^
but, why? O.O
why? O.O
sehun wasn't there? O.O (*justkid)^^
so, overall it's very nice story^^
next LuYoon or YoonKai author-nim^^ or YoonHun '-' kkk~
i'm seriously '-'
ninuninun
#4
Chapter 4: i've read all chapter
yeay happy ending for luyoon, finally they can be together
first, i feel resentful with corong's character. but, in the last part, i like her because she has a strong heart to let luhan to be with a girl he love.
babyoongie #5
Chapter 4: woah! :O how sweet <3 i wish that I have a boyfriend like luhan-oppa..nice story author-nim, :D
ticctacc03 #6
Chapter 4: Waaahhhhh...Love It...
Please Make Another Luyoon Fic <3
Jane_S2_Sehun #7
Chapter 4: Happy ending<3<3<3 I hope u'll comeback soon. I love u & ur story so much >///<
Shanny_887
#8
Chapter 4: Cute LuYoon <3<3<3!!
Thank you for update ^o^
I love your story ~~
Fight author nim~ =)))
aetherius
#9
Chapter 4: LUYOON <3 Their love in this story just asdfghjkl ;u;
Great job authornim ^^ I enjoyed reading these two stories so much and I loved the plot and the sweet moments in this fanfic :DD
I hope you continue to write more LuYoon and other stories ;)) i'll be looking forward to reading more of your works. Usually I really feel sad at the end of stories but because of the adorable ending I'm just dying in feels and somewhat sighing in relief aha GOOD LUCK AUTHORNIM! \o/
Shanny_887
#10
Chapter 3: LuYoon pleaseee !! T^T
Please update soon~~
Fight auhor nim !