Chapter 1: Omg I just didn’t know what to expect like I was like maybe it’s going to end like this but it was such a twist at the end but it was written beautifully! I know it’s been a while since you’ve probably written these but I think you could edit it to where there is a space within the paragraphs? Idk I think it would be easier to read in a way. But other than that I really enjoyed this!
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