Detached Past

Description

Disgust and anger mix like old friendsboth are feelings felt by man. Both have the ability to drive everything a person has over the edge, leaving only hatred in its place. It clouds judgements and takes control over every limb, muscle and bone until all that is left is for it to be embraced. Anger drives people in ways that are unimaginable. But worst of allit has the power to fuel the killer inside of you. 

 

Preview

 "Sir, please, if you could just wait—" The petite nurse standing beside him stopped in midsentence just as Kris snapped his neck towards her, giving away his bloodshot eyes. The young nurse gasped softly, pity seeping into her own eyes and the grip she had on his arm loosened. Kris yanked his elbow away from her and turned his whole body to face the girl.

            "Wait for what?" Kris raised an eyebrow, venom dripping from his very own words. His eyes seemed to get redder with each sentence. "I have been waiting two goddamn years for my mother to get out of this place. My son of a father—who is now dead, may I add, almost killed her and left her here. He ing left her here. Now I am the one responsible for whatever happens to my mom. She is not going to die," Kris paused to look around the hospital and found every person staring back at him. The young nurse stood there dumbfounded; agape.

            Kris took a deep breath and lowered his voice, "I have waited for the day where my mom could finally step out of that hospital gown. I have waited for the day where she could finally breathe in the morning air. I have waited for the day where my mom could finally be a mom. I have waited every ing day. Those days never came. I am ing done with waiting."

Foreword

Kris is going to be paired with an original character. And just in case you didn't know, Henry is from Super Junior-M and Amber is a part of f(x). The other members of f(x) could possibly show up, I don't know yet, heh. And then there's EXO members, of course.

Guys, I don't know what I'm doing. First fanfic yay. Uh, I didn't know what to tag so I just tagged anything. Don't hurt me if it isn't 100% accurate. I guess Kris and Henry are the main characters of the story. This story isn't centered around Henber but there is slight Henber yay. (✿◠‿◠)  I don't even know what a foreword is but I just wanted to clarify a few things. Anyway don't hate on me too much and happy reading. 

Please don't give up on me. And comments are appreciated, they keep me motivated. ^◡^ 

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xMrTeddii #1
AUTHOR NIMMMMMMMMMMM
DetNaq
#2
Chapter 3: Wait wait.. i dont get it.. is kris's mom tortured? Huhu.. why's kris's life soo miserable??? x(
DetNaq
#3
Chapter 2: Omo.. all my biases in this fic.. epic!!!! =D
So now what? Amber and Henry are an item? Why do they look awkward?
Well.. I'll just have to wait for next update then..
DetNaq
#4
Chapter 1: That was scary.. his dad is scary.. >…<
loveattime17
#5
OMG OMGG OMGGGG HI. LOOL Hi Winnie. eue You finally upload I see. mhm.
Shyndikrisber #6
Chapter 1: New subby.next plz!
xMrTeddii #7
im your first subbie. you shall feel honored c: