Goodbye Summer

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Two best friends who've known each other since they were kids. After several years, they began to develop feelings for each other. will they be able to convey their messages to each other before they never see each other again? This is based on the song Goodbye Summer by f(x). The reason why i chose Sehun is because he seemed to fit the character of my story. A few other authors could have written a story like this, i know im not the only person out there who gets inspired by songs. Any plagiarism will not be condemned because this is 100% written by me. Please enjoy! ^^
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maiquie24 #1
Chapter 1: Ouch. Regrets, regrets, and more regrets.
Park_HyeSun #2
Chapter 1: This story is alright, and I do know that you were inspired by one of f(x)'s songs since you mentioned it earlier. However, I would like to extend a few suggestions if you don't mind.

Firstly, paragraphs can be done but yours is a little too chunky. It would be recommendable for you to split it into various sections, perhaps five or six. Next, since you are switching POVs, it would be good to indicate such a thing clearly to the reader. Therefore, spacing, once again, is an asset. Thirdly, you have a few typos, but that is understandable. We are human, and so we overlook a few mistypes once in a while. Example-wise, (labele) should be (labelled) instead.

All in all, I hope I did not upset you, author. I only intended to offer my honest comment for your writing. Have a nice day ahead. c:
adlina_exo #3
Chapter 1: emm.. this story is kind of dull.. I'm sorry..~
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