Control

Description

Title: Control
Pairing: chenmin, kaisoo, minimal taohun
Rating: NC-18 (currently NC-13)
Genre: action, tragedy, romance, drama
Length: prologue + eight chapters
Summary: When Chen finds out he can manipulate electricity he's told it's a gift, but sometimes gifts bring more pain than happiness.

Extra: deleted/scrapped scenes

**Disclaimer: By writing these pieces I only wish to contribute to the fandom in the only way I know how. I BY NO MEANS consider any of these ships to be real and mean absolutely no disrespect to the members of any bands I write about. They are simply characters in my works and by no means are meant to be taken as actual representations of the members. They are purely fiction.

Foreword

Thin lips pulled back and teeth clenched tight together. Brows furrowed and face contorted, Chen screamed, but there was no sound. There was only bright light and searing pain.

They say that when thunder is audible it means a storm is close enough for lightning to hit. They say it can strike even when there is no rain, because the tops of storm clouds can reach further than the rest of the cloud, as if anxious to sneak up on those who do not expect it.

This was not a lightning storm but it was completely unexpected, and by some unfair chance Chen became the victim of a twisted fate he could not have ever believed was possible in any place other than a dark, gruesome fairy tale.

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BlancaL #1
I am kinda dissipointed that this fic doesnt have more following. It is very well written and I was excited for the continuation of the story :( hehe Im kinda late BUT STILL !
xiukisses
#2
Chapter 1: Jdmakxmmaka I love you and I love this so far! Ahh the way you describe things is fantabulous. I am dying over here, okay? Also I really wanna know who the student that made the gardens fantastic is because of Xiumin's reaction and so yeah

//whispers// I love you :)
Sakuragurl10
#3
Chapter 1: It's great so far, keep it up ^^
manganime98
#4
Chapter 1: Wow. I must say, I'm super excited for the continuation of this story. I'm a bit disappointed that nobody else has found this fic yet; I think that it's very well-written. The flow is smooth and transitions to each scene smoothly. You also describe things in a way that makes it easy for the readers to imagine (I'm jealous; I always have a really hard time describing things, LOL). The characters seem very mysterious and hidden, so I'm really excited to see how this plays out. Great work; I think you're a great writer! Keep it up! Fighting! XD