HE'S MY CRYBABY (EDITING)
Description
What happens when your father ask you to guard the famous crybaby??
Will he disturb you with your gangs activity??
Or will you two fall for each other??
What's happen next??
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Hi everyone!!
So, as you can read the tittle, it shows "EDITING" means that I'm going to re-read this fic and edit this fic.
And that's mean, there's A LOT of things going to change in this fic such as the grammar, the words that i use and the font, ah yeah, before I forgot, I'll change YOU to SHE.
I won't change the plot tho.
I CAN'T GUARANTEE YOU GUYS THAT I'LL UPDATE DAILY SINCE I'M BUSY WITH MY FANFIC--> OUAT: RED RIDING HOOD , my life and my school -_-
This is my first fanfic and it was 2013 where I was just 13 years old and as expected MY GRAMMAR .
I'll notice you at every chap I've edited so that you won't confuse.
For the second time reader, I won't be putting Jiyeon (aka Hyerin's BFF) anymore.
I FORBID YOU TO PLAGIARIZE THIS FANFIC AT ANY TYPE OF FORM.
DON'T YOU DARE TO SAVE THIS FIC WITHOUT MY PERMISSION.
Foreword
CHARACTER:
- OC: Park Hyerin
- 17 years old
- Leader of the famous gangster group called the Blue Pheonix.
- Daughter of the ex leader,Park Joong Guk.
- Has a very high achievement in various kind of martial arts such as kungfu,wushu,taekwondo,judo and karate.
Personality:
in the morning:lively,joyfull,cheerfull,kind hearted,loves to help her friends but easily curse when she was shocked.Always were glassses to keep her identity hiden.Pretend to be a "nerd".
at night:serious,cold,merciless if anyone mess with her team mates or territory.
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In the morning, she was just an innocent looking girl that students dont usually know.But when the days turns dark,she turned to a leader of a famous gangster group called The Blue Pheonix.Every gangster scared of her. She was famous being the merciless and cold hearted lady.What happen when her father ask her to guard the famous crybaby in her school?What's his reason?
Oh Sehun:
(SO CUUTE>_<)
- 17 years old
- LOVES TO CRY.Sweet and bubbly.Think and act innocently.Love his hyungs very much.
- The famous crybaby in your school which is SM High.He easily cried when he is scared,angry,worried and happy too.
- Said to be an orphan.
- Live with Exok.
- Has a secret he don't know that only your father know it.Who is he???
Your father aka Park Joong Guk:
- TheBluePheonix ex leader.Very rich.Knows Sehun secret that Sehun don't know.He's the one who adopt ExoM from the orphanage and make them as his sons.
ExoM aka Blue Pheonix member:
From the left: Tao, Lay, Xiumin,Luhan, Kris, Chen
- Tao: The maknae.Although he's the maknae,he is the most skillful fighter beside Hyerin.
- Lay: He's the smartass of the group. He's a gentleman and very calm. He's very cute when he's smiling. Hyerin adore his calmness. Hyerin favourite 'brother'.Really knows how to use computers.
- Xiumin: The eldest.Loves to eat baozi.Skillful with gadgets.
- Luhan: He's also a very skillful fighter.Overprotective sometimes.He think he's the one who love Hyerin the most.
- Kris: The one that incharge of taking care of the member when Hyerin was gone aka the second leader.Has a deadly stare that can kill. Skillful in fighting.
- Chen: Calm,kind,has a lot of same personality with Lay.Skillful fighter.
- ExoM live with Hyerin in her father's mansion.They act like her brothers.Very caring,protactive and loving towards her.
- Not herr real brothers.They came from the same orphanage but not the same family.Study in her school too but keep a very very very low profile so that they're not exposed.
- Nobody really notice their present.Don't mess with Hyerin or one of their member if you don't want to face their wrath.They're like Demons sent from HELL.
ExoK aka SM High kingka:
From the left:D.O,Chanyeol,Sehun,Baekhyun,Kai,Suho
Suho:17 years old(born first).The eldest.Very kind,caring and friendly.Doesn't like to bully Sehun.
Kai:17years old(born 2nd last).Love to smirk.Kindda flirty.
Baekhyun:17 years old(born fourth).Love to tease Sehun.Has a very bright smile that can melt the girls heart.
Chanyeol:17 years old(born third).Has a creepy yet cute smile.Love to tease Sehun.Protactive towards his friends especially Sehun.Although he love to tease Sehun,he love(as brothers)Sehun so much.
D.O:17 years old(born second).Same as Suho.He and Suho are like the "mature" ones who doesn't like to bully or tease Sehun.Has a very big eyes like Chanyeol but he has bigger eyes than him.
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http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/584304
Credits to SehunQriCute
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