F.B.I- Federal Inspector

Description

Kim Jongin has always had a crush on Do Kyungsoo, everyone knew that.

But what they didn't know is that, when it comes to Kyungsoo he either turns greasy or erted. As Jongin makes a final attempt to ask Kyungsoo out, he pulls the most corny and erted pick-up line ever.

"Excuse me young man, FBI here. May I have a few words with you? "

"FBI? Jongin, what do you want? "

"I'm a Federal Inspector, and I'm afraid your is too y Kyungsoo. "

"...What the hell is wrong with you??! "

Foreword

Hey Pearls!! Here take some corny Kaisoo ^__^

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Ninja-assain007 #1
Chapter 1: "He just kinda grows on you, like some kind of fungus or disease. One that won't go away." That line had me rolling :D ya hear that Kai, kyungsoo compared you to fungi, fungi Kai ~ there's a ring to it ^ uu ^
linping44 #2
Chapter 1: Omg, this is just.
Pure brilliant.
So cute yet so cheesy, exactly my kind of pizza c':
jisova #3
Chapter 1: i just wish you turn this into sequel and make it longer..its super cute tho
sujuexolove #4
Chapter 1: This is so cute I died XD
AeChaPark #5
Chapter 1: So lovely. the smile on my face never leaves ever since i started to the end xDD kekeke love it!
Dalliance #6
Chapter 1: Wow, Jongin did gave the worst pick up lines a guy could give. I guess I learned something new now.
The end is sweet. Very nice. :3
And yes, I did saw the ninja couples. Jongdae is my bias but that side of him cracked me up (a lot) and aaaw, Yixing is just so precious ;_;
Very well done, author!
MerywantsanInterlude #7
Chapter 1: Ohh this was funny!! I hate pick up lines, I've never received one though, guys haven been very blunt to me which is not good either xDD
noya_couple #8
Chapter 1: oh, i like this fic...
good job...
and i really hope you will write another fic like this and of course with many chapters hehehe...

thanks for writing and sharing
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