Bad Dreams

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So I felt like trying to improve my writing. Don't let the beginning fool you, this is NOT a sad story and it doesn't really involve angst. I'm just trying to work on more detailed writing. :) However it is a topic that is close to me, so although critiquing is welcome, please try to be nice. :) I hope you like it~

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NikkiLovesAnime #1
Chapter 1: Aww Kai is so sweet here... Very different from the way he is usually portrayed as *cough* player *cough* ... Very nice ^_^
kiseop4Eva
#2
Chapter 1: Soooooooo sweeeet~^^
chalx-
#3
Chapter 1: Haaa this one is so fluffy :"
sweet_lava
#4
Chapter 1: Ahhhhh cutee ♥
fikaelf89
#5
so cute,sweet and everything was perfect !!! *_*
midnightcool
#6
Chapter 1: Wahhh so cute!! And the details were amazing! Wish my writing was like this lol it was so kawaii ^.^
ilovebaekhyun985530
#7
Chapter 1: Soooo sweet
DanielleDanielKy
#8
Chapter 1: OMGGG its sooo perfect , soo sweet , soo cute !