Dove in the White Cage

Description

It's more than till the death do us part in their marriage.

Foreword

Clear liquid in glass flask, she hides it in the deepest part of her bedside drawer.

Two drops every day in Sunggyu’s night tea disguised as sweetener, send him off on the hundredth morning.

 

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An entry for: Welcome To Our Dream Writing Contest

Prompt: Feather and Stone

 

 

Reviewed by -natsukim at LoL Review Shop

 

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Amoundies_tta #1
Chapter 1: Ugh this is beautiful!! Although I didn't really understand some words. (I'm not really good in english). Then the explanation in after, really helped.
So like that, ooh I don't even know that Bali has a culture like that. Mesatia? The widow jump into the fire and then become a goddess.
Uh I'm of the cultures.. Hahaha oh and Hiiii!! Indonesian!! I am Indonesian too!! :)
Thanks for writing :)
JustCallMeA #2
Chapter 2: Hey....
Love this Story...
You Know a lot of Bali Tradition.... Did you come from that Place ? Means Is Bali your Hometown ? Hehehehe :D
honeylove #3
...you gave me goosebumps. I was searching the dictionary for some of the terms you used but couldn't find it! Turned out to be cultural-related terms.

Nice research you did there! :D
kyootiez_ #4
Chapter 2: this is sad, really TT_____TT
but very beautiful..
monochromedreaming #5
Chapter 1: asjdlsaskdfhdcnas ;_______;
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