↬ the little shop on the street ✾ hiatus!

trishapolo
✾ 062314 || changing up the story plot

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MiniHamtaro
#1
Chapter 20: Hi! Sorry I forgot to comment ><'' I was kinda busy cause it's my first year at uni..
So on to my comment, seeing Zora and Tao fight is somewhat cute but Tao is so mean at the same time.. not gentlemanly at all.. but at the same time, I can kind of imagine him doing that xD
Plus Jae is probably the scary, responsible scary twin while Kai is the playful one.. wonder how her an Luhan are gonna get along and how they will progress..
Well, I'll try to comment asap on your next update!
Kupuritama
#2
Chapter 20: aaaand I'm dumb and forgot I didn't actually finish this comment I had started when the story was first updated and left it half finished in a pinned tab. OTL;;
This first chapter is really adorbs though! Okay, so amusing/ hilarious is a more fitting term when connected with all of Zora and Tao's parts but really this new revamp of the story is off to a great start~!

Poor Minho in the beginning- him being the one to personally do all the pairings means all of the initial issues and such among the partners is going to be blamed on him. LOL.

Zora and Tao fighting over the designer bag though. But damn it Tao- your comeback to her mentioning your dark circles should have been "the bags under my eyes are gucci- just like the one I plan on taking here." /SHOTTOOBLIVION/

Minjae is so adorable- the mental image of him running around in his little footed pajamas is just- UGH. I CAN'T. ; _____ ;

Anyways yeah~ I'm sorry about the super belated comment. OTL;;;;;
Looking forward to seeing where you take this now~!! o u o
spontaneity
#3
Chapter 20: the first chapter is so cute!! :D
LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO TAO AND ZORA THOUGH XDDD

minjae sounds so en adorable omfg. kai LOLOL
the kim twin's relationship is so cute

and did i miss something o.o
whose zora?
i checked the characters page
but none of the girls are named zora.. o.o
YewNoWhoville #4
Chapter 20: yey! lovin the first chap! omg tao and zora. >.< and jae's first interaction with jongins friend. >.< this is a really good start! can't wait for the next chap and the other girls!! kyaaarrrrgggg ↖(^▽^)↗ *****nc
starliet
#5
Chapter 20: Yay! This was a cool chapter to read. Ah, that's Tao with Zora lol fighting over Gucci. I'll comment with more thoughts once I reread it, but I like it c:
starliet
#6
Chapter 19: Wahh the story says updated by the chapter is in draft status, why do you tease me so ;-;
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 19: Chen omf-
Man just looking at the written times make me cringe. Ungodly hours those are. (Unless of course you're already up since you never went to sleep that is)

"Friends" huh? Just friends Jongdae? ;D /slapped/
All of these dorks are secret agents- how even...? OTL;;
spontaneity
#8
Chapter 19: LMFAO chen <3
and i see that exo showtime reference LOLOLOL
isn't my style xDDD

LMFAO
i thoguht lay was quiet cause he didn't have a place to stay at LOL
and kai!!! <3
MiniHamtaro
#9
Chapter 18: Ooooooo~ man, this is exciting! a brand new teaser!
Ehh, I can imagine how he looks like.. Probably like how I look before exams. =P
Unit Asinine. Sounds pretty cool~
Looking forward to the new teasers and I'm still working on the info you wanted. c:
b-cuzUluvME
#10
Chapter 18: well that was detailed! good job on ure first teaser, cant wait for the rest!