Beneath the earth

Description

Nobody knows how it started or who it started from, but the government made sure to keep it secret. Taking the children, who showed any sign of a special ability, away from their parents and sending them to live in an underground city known as Detura. 

Kim Kibum was taken from his parents at the age of 5 and brought to Detura. Growing up, he never questioned the world around him. Never questioned the disappearances of his neighbors every now and then, or why he wasn't allowed to go outside. But now, 13 years later, with the disappearance of his little brother. Kibum has begun to doubt everything and everyone. 

He goes out to search for his missing brother, finding the most unlikely allies and uncovering dangerous secrets that could change his life forever. 

Foreword

Description , but I really don't know how to explain what the stories about. OTL. 

this is my first fanfic, I've read ALOT, and I mean a lot. And I have started writing some, but have never posted any. So I finally got up the nerve to post one. I thought of this idea a few days ago and just had to start writing it. 

My life is music so I may recommend songs to listen to while reading this or might even add lyrics from a song that relate to the story in the beginning of the chapter. If that's alright.  

 

 

 

Author's Thoughts
Zelda9001
Chapter 1 will be up either today or tomorrow.
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kkeuchi #1
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jjongluvbummie #2
Chapter 6: really nice chp
sor3cc #3
it´s one of the best i´ve read, please continue!!!
...first comment I´ve done and tne fanfic is unique and awesome ;D
keep going!
love suspense....please...happy ending....pretty please.....=P
iluvbubbles_yay #4
Chapter 6: I've just found this and it's wonderful! It's pretty original, and the whole idea of these people with powers first taken from their parents, and then kidnapped while down there is fascinating! And then the way that Jonghyun revealed his power was absolutely marvellous! Giggled so much, and Kibum's reaction! Just gorgeous! Take your time posting, but I'll look forwards to an update whenever it may come! ^^
kpopinsane23 #5
Chapter 5: I actually loved the ending. It gives the tiniest bit of jongkey.
mocchi #6
Chapter 5: I actually liked the ending, huhuh. So Jonghyun can read minds... or some version of that. Interesting. I like that there are a lot of things that are slightly suspicious or questionable dotted around everywhere. In all, i'm happy with the update, even if you're not! :)
Secretsagain #7
Chapter 2: I think it's a really interesting story. You write very well, especially since it's your first story. Other than a few mistakes, it's almost perfect. Maybe you could describe the scenes a bit more? Like perhaps the argument between Key and Taemin can be expanded? (Look at me being a hypocrite. I can't even write so well and here I am.)
But it's a great story and the plot is really interesting!
jjongluvbummie #8
its amazing.try to update soon.
kpopinsane23 #9
Chapter 2: wow. scary. but i want to read more. please update soon.
onyuuu #10
Chapter 1: YOU UPDATED ALREADY!? WOW YOURE GR8 AUGH THIS SOUNDS SO FREAKING INTERESTING. oops capslock is on, I'm just really excited, anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm kinda sad the mom died, :/ poor lady, but update soon!!
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