To Open Those Eyes

Description

Warning: blind Sungjong. In which the not-so-average photographer lives in your average coffee shop. And gets blown away by this not-so-average boy. Leading to the not-so-average exhibition.

Foreword

Preview

 

I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead - Sylvia Plath  

 

Myungsoo is sipping coffee.

 

It’s dark, no sugar no cream. It’s a little too hot for his tongue, and he savors the feeling of numb taste buds as he once again drowns the pink muscle in delectably hot, bitter liquid.

 

The coffee shop he frequents is popular, with enough of an ambient atmosphere to encourage people to shut up and keep to themselves instead of chattering too amicably, but busy enough to flood the room with the white noise that comes with busy typing from the starving artist sitting at the table to his left and the student frantically flipping pages on his right. At the counter, an average looking barista rings the bell and whispers a name, as though afraid to shatter the spell that fills the room.

 

Myungsoo closes his eyes and lets this silence fill his mind.

 

One by one, first the typing of the starving artist, then the shuffle of papers, and finally the dinging of that bell, the noises disappear from his auditory field. And he is left in the coffee house alone.

 

He loves it.

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minsoph74
#1
Chapter 1: okay, wow, amazing fic! I feel like it's not that long, and the story isn't complicated but it's just wonderful. Wonderfully written!
AdrianaInspirit
#2
Chapter 1: O,g this is so beautiful!!! <3 i love it <3
allhailjongie
#3
Chapter 1: I am so thankful for this Myungjong fic! There are so many fics that have a bittersweet ending but this one was just wonderful (just like the author ^.^)! I love how Myungsoo creates the whole exhibit for Sungjong to see! <3 Amazing job as usual author-nim! :) Happy New year!
tokkeiko
#4
Chapter 1: Awwwww!!! Myungjong fluffinessssssssssssss....
I always like Myungsoo as a photographer and him as a photographer changing his style so that Sungjong can see it melted my heart into one gooey pile of feels for Myungjong.
It's a really beautiful story!
HaeSicaistheBest #5
Chapter 1: thanks God, i can see. thank you, for this beautiful myungjong fic.
Leo-nim #6
Chapter 1: This is a work of art! Goodness, write a whole book from this and I'd buy and read it!
It's stories like these that keep me from leaving aff. I love it!
taeilcoat
#7
I absolutely love this! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it, it's perfect!
deliberatemistake
#8
Chapter 1: P5 - It hurts, really. I know this is all very touching and emotional but Sungjong...

P6 - Argh, what is Myungsoo up to now? I am so nervous. Excited but nervous. What does he mean by it's going to be all about Sungjong...now you have me at the edge of the seat and between feeling sad and anxious...I really don't know how to react.

P7 - OMG. That's all I can say...seriously. I'm touched Myung, I truly am. Ah if only Sungjong could see what he does to Myungsoo, the power he has over him. I'm here all lament and regret...pathetic me.

P8 - Can I hate you for doing this to me? I'm all tears now, and I just...fiction fiction fiction...

p9 - So at the moment two feelings are battling inside me, one happy, one sad and I guess you know both. This is really really good, just...I wish you...I won't say the rest. But yeah emotionally torn apart here.
deliberatemistake
#9
Chapter 1: I will try something else...the way I comment on poems.

P1 and 2 - Love them, simply love them. Myungsoo himself is a whole new world and I love every minute of it. The coffee shop is a world tucked inside another, and then we have Myungsoo. 'White noise' - this is pure poetry - I love it! I adore it. That one expression turned my time upside down. Okay, so yes, I love how insde the coffee shop, - Myungsoo finds his own world, that removes all cliches regarding coffee shop fics - amazing!

Stanza 3: 'But the boy before him cannot see the world' - That's why I was anxious about reading this...I am so depressed. You have no idea how sad I am at the moment...but I guess for the story's sake I could say it hit at the right place. If someone hadn't yet been drawn into the story, this would be the hook.

Stanza 4: I think I should take a break here. You're an amzing writer and you don't need me to tell you that. But seriously...I love Sungjong. A bit too much. And I know this is fiction but it hurts...
bohyemi #10
Chapter 1: Wooooow I really don't know whatvto say but woooow