Excess Baggage

Description

Junmyeon is about to leave Seoul for good. His friend, Jongdae, helps him pack things and feelings up.

Foreword

This is a practice SuChen fic which just came out of the blue while I was writing the last chapter of Dragonfly. So yeah, HELLO, CLICHE PLOT?? OTL

Slightly fueled by EXO's Don't Go. M version ofc, because I'm biased lol.

It was supposed to be a drabble, but well... yeah.

And omg I need SuChen shippers on my tline so um, talk to me????

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zyxzjs_alshiva #1
Chapter 1: THIS IS SO GOOD
D_S_H_ #2
Chapter 1: Wow this is fantastic. The writing is beautiful and the story is so perfect - the characters both too shy and awkward to confess until there’s no turning back, the little details of back story filtering into this one long scene, and the hope for someday. (Id totally love a brief sequel about that someday three years from now, but I’d also understand not making one.)
CaptainHanbae #3
Chapter 1: OMG CANT CONTAIN MY SUCHEN FEELS Q Q THIS WAS SO GOOD ; A ;
nurzuwaida #4
Chapter 1: Idek what to say is this supposed to be sad or idk why are they separated what is this why does my heart hurts so much its just a fanfic im so mad why did u do this they deserves a happy ending my heart is breaking oh god im crying
lorolemman #5
Chapter 1: Gah! So beautiful. Thank you for writing that.
ParkMiyoung #6
Chapter 1: reading this with the saddest music of naruto playing wasn't a good idea ;~;
it is so beautifully written and their feelings are so true and the way you described them really was so real that I nearly felt them...amazing job you did here.
--pearl #7
Chapter 1: omg this fic has made myself a sobbing mess. it's so beautiful ;~;
BubblyFox #8
Chapter 1: -wipes tears- This, is freaking beautiful. I loved the emotional conflict Jongdae went through, it was described perfectly, without any unnecessary addings to the writing style that would mess up the whole vibe. It's been a long time I haven't read a one-shot so beautiful, thanks for posting it and I'll enjoy to read more stories of yours :)
Huilen #9
Chapter 1: you killed me, seriuosly. TT
FlameFlowerful #10
Chapter 1: MY HEART AHHHH that was rly good suchen. I have a lump in my throat after reading this. It was simple yet beautifully done
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