Raven's Gate
Mellifluous Review Shop [NOT ACCEPTING]Title: 10/10
The title is short and nice, I really like it.
Appearance: 5/5
I love everything, too speechless.
Foreword & Description: 7/10
The foreword doesn't give out much, it's a bit too short but it's still good. But, I think you should work on the format
Spelling/Grammar: 8/10
A few slips here and there, but still acceptable
Plot: 18/20
The plot is unique, i can tell you that but it's a bit off too.
Characters: 13/15
The characters were unique but I sort of dislike the fact, well that's how I portray Luhan in your story
as girly -ish? It's okay but a little bit awkward.
Flow: 9/10
The flow is quite good^^
Writing Style: 10/10
I loved the writing style, it was great.
Enjoyment: 9/10
I enjoyed it since it has my favourite ship
Total: 89/100
Reviewed by summerskye
Well, the strictness level you requested for is 4 so...this is what I think with that strictness level
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