⇁ The Participants
✰ Zodiac High ↺ applications momentarily closed due to hiatus
Review ( jiminz ): This is where your review goes and all, la-di-da-di-da /skips and frolics and everything and just/ Yeah, well now you get the point, right? I would hope so .__. Yeah, so this is the applicants page o/
Review ( critique ): Yep, this is where my review shall go. It'll be short, expect that, okay?
Review ( pasteltear ): New reviewer since she doesn't want to apply anymore. ouo
Status: Chosen ( in the story ), Accepted ( nothing wrong with app ), Pending ( few things wrong, go back and fix it ), Rejected ( completely wrong, go back and fix things that are wrong )
( your status shall be bolded and in blue like this )
TOTAL NUMBER OF APPLICANTS : 10
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Review: Awww, her nickname is so cute ;u; Seullie hehe ♥ Oh ouch, shards OAO and slight discoloration, how interesting, yes? I like that necklace as well ouo so pretty and her fashion is really adorable hehe~ Good description, I like how you went into each and every little thing and described it owo She has a twin sister ;A; how cute omf- Ohh unprescribed glasses, I use those too =u= like in character roleplaying or applications OTL JUNGKOOK AS HER BEST FRIEND, CAN YOU NOT OTL ohhhh OOC friend ♥ I like that mhmm~ and Hyungseok too /sobs/ GAH I LOVE MINGMING OKAY LIKE PLEASE UGH AJPOSGJISPGSPODGIJPDFSOPDIGJASFIJSDGOJSDF /slapped/ That is the end of my spazz. Now then, I shall continue. /coughs/ I love your ideas ;u; /nods/ I will put them to good use darling and I'll find out a way to make sure everyone will finally realize that she isn't blind ♥ Thank you darling for applying, accepted by me and now passing you onto critique~ ouo
Review: Hello there Min. First of off, I went on a Mingming challenge and tried to find a nice horizontal edit of him and I have failed. It was just that picture and how it was supposed to be was a bit ticking me off. Second of all, what happened to the spacing? I mean, I'm sure it should have turned out fine but you know what? It doesn't matter anyways, problem excused! Now, moving onto your real review, your ulzzang is very adorable, and the fact that she actually had a twin sister is surprising indeed. Interesting fears, gave me quite a good laugh. Everything was fine, nothing seemed wrong or out of place. Personality was good, liked how you broke it up into small paragraphs. Mingming the "gangster." I intended him to be a real gangster, and Seck intended that too but the fact that he isn't is really far more realistic. Good job on that. Um, it would be nice if you could give a few links for her style but you don't have too. Thank you for applying, we shall accept you.
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Review: Lee Dasom, damn people picking my ulzzang biases ;A; ♥ Oh 50 / 50, I like ouo Virgo babies for the win o/ /is a Virgo ; slapped/ I like how you make her the un-nerdy nerd? orz does that even make sense? I love her style anywho~ The brainiac with learning disability, how touching omf my kokoro okey I loved how you made her so uncute I mean, that's going out of the usual applications of cutesy nerds (?) and I like that. Her normal background, that is so new. Like really, everyone else has spontaneous backgrounds and you're here like she's just a normal teenager omf- ♥ UGH HE FORGOT HER HOW COULD HE THAT STUPID ACCIDENT I CANNOT WITH THIS /flips your application/ I love it ;u; when you get more ideas, just add it in your app and comment below and we'll review you again! Passing you onto critique~ ouo
Review: Hi Vicky! Thank you for applying, and nice work on the layout. I really liked it. Dasom doesn't really fit the brainiac spot if you get what I mean but you changed her whole personality around. You made her cocky instead of those mainstream aegyo cute nerd. Bless your soul for not being cliche. I found it intriguing how her style is, you really wouldn't expect her to be on the latest trends. Learning diability for the brainiac? Oh, not good for her, thank goodness she found a way around it. And that'll be fun writing. Her interations are cute really, and going back, I liked how you inputted others' thoughts on her. Onto Jungmin, it's so vague. I mean, vague is good because it gives Seck more ideas but can you be a bit more specific on the accident? That would be better. And if you want, you can just leave their interaction like that to let the author think more ( why are you so evil ;A; - Seck ). Hmm, the smiley faces though, how cute to have them on your app. Accepted, thank you for applying. I seemed a bit mean in your review, just wanted to clear that up and say that you did a fantastic job.
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Status: Chosen | Accepted | Pending | Rejected
Review: Hello Lou ouo Sora, kinda a mainstream ulzzang but nonetheless pretty! o/ Hmm, Korean and Viet, how interesting ;w; and Vy is my middle / Vietnamese name as well ohoho. Your fashion is interesting? ouo Her personality is okay, I think critique will explain more on that since I just skim through everything. Oh goodness, her background is cute ;A; Sniffing people omf- I CANNOT /screams ; shot/ YOU MADE LE YOUR ENEMY I CANNOT BECAUSE SHE IS MY BEAUTIFUL BIAS AND WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME OH THE AGONY /sobs/ Anywho, they're so cute around each other. Okay, sending you off the critique. o/
Review: Hi Lou. First impression is your character name is very boy-ish, since there are quite a few kpop stars that are named Minhyuk. Your ethnicity is quite intriguing, but the thing that I'm not okay with ( well, not so much ) is her extreme fluency on each language. I would expect conversational or maybe even basic, it just seems a bit unrealistic. That's why, sorry. Her style is short and even though you gave us links, there's not really that much of a difference in the fashion so I'm kinda confused. If you guys need resources, I'll go post some up right now. Now, we have stated in the application a few set rules, one being dont change the layout, even the slightest bit ( you changed the picture but that is not what I mind ) and to include the four main traits. You are allowed to use synonyms but there is a difference between intelligent and cunning. Intelligent is more of book smart, memorization, and the skill to retain that memory. Cunning is being more crafty, it's your own ideas and the ability to do so, hence why she is a prankster. You make your character so well-rounded, and I kind of dont really like that. It's like mashing up all the characters together,and it's awkward since each character is supposed to have strengths and weakness. I love your trivia and likes, etc. And we asked you to make the how you met section about the paper slips, but it's nice to know how they really met. I think for now, I'm still a bit iffy about your character but we'll have to wait for pasteltear.
Review: Yays! Go viets, keke~ LOL I can see that she is quite the diva with clothes, OuO. the personality is just... so hardcore. Wae, capital letters? I feel like I'm being yelled at~ >.< IDK why, but I keep referring your character as a guy because of the Minhyuk~ Sorry! nothing is wrong with it, so happy to be accepted! Haha!
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Review: I like how you still used a Korean ulzzang even though she's Aries so thank you for that Hana ;A; I like colored contact lenses and her style, thank you ouo Her personality is alright but I'd like to see more of how impulsive she is if that's not a problem. I like your choices of clubs and classes ouo If you can, add more personality to Junhong? I have put in traits and I don't really see them going into good use? ono;; I love everything else though! Moving you onto Gamine~
Review: Hello Hana, for your application, I'd like to see more of the four traits being inputed into yours and Junhong's personality. I actually really don't see how they'll end up together but maybe that pabo up there will find a way. Accidental kiss, oh, I like it. Not much wrong with your application, accepted by me but it would be nice if you could go back and imply the traits in before pasteltear reviews you.
Review: another oh-so perfect perfection. your character's personality is so simple and well described. I can just image it in my head. The background is just, like an everyday life of an asian...~ LOL an accidental kiss?! i can totally picture that! very simple and it didn't take me that much time to finish the whole thing! another application I really enjoyed, thanks for applying!
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Review: OH MY FREAKING GOD WHY MY BIASES I MEAN IT'S OKAY BUT SOBS BECAUSE MY HEART WILL BREAK WRITING THIS but I won't let you have Jongup eue take Hansol instead omf- /shot/ Okay, anyways, moving on! That's so cute that Hansol has a nickname for her ;A; /cries/ I LOVE YOUR ULZZANG CHOICE, JANG HAEBYEOL ;A; Oh, her style is interesting, letterman jackets ouo You used the key words for personality ;A; let me love you omf- THEIR BACKGROUND IS SO CUTE AND CLICHE I CANNOT WITH THIS /flips your application/ ♥ It's too perfect, everything is just right and omf asdfghjkl happily passing you onto critique and pasteltear shall be reviewing all of you guys when she has the time ♥ ugh now you commented something and I'm confused so I'll leave you pending if you decide to come back ;; because I really love your app dear.
Review: Hello Hannah! Her nicknames are creative, I like that. You worded everything beautifully and used the four key traits given. Good job on that. Otome games and mangas, I'm starting to like this girl already. She dislikes coffee though, what a same. I like your likes and dislikes and also trivia. Your choices of friends and a rival are good, congrats on that.How you met is very descriptive and Seck can actually write something about it. I think your application overall is great. Waiting for pasteltear.
Review: My gawds, it's so descriptive!~ -cries- I really enjoyed reading your application~ there is nothing wrong with it...~ yesh, byeon seo eun is awshome isn't she? very thanks for applying dearie!
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Review: Oh, I love her already ;u; her name /cries/ that's so sad that she's bullied but oh wells ono Her style is good and her overall personality is fine as well. Her history is simple but it clears up most things, yay! OHHHH Her enemy being "Sunggyu's girl" yes, plot twist bless your soul asdfghjkl. Sunggyu's personality is okay, still need a bit more of the four traits in there. Haha, you're so cute in the scene requests ;u; of course darling, if you get chosen, okay? ♥ Passing you on o/
Review: Hello Kryssi, what a pretty name. Okay, definitely upsetting that people would call her Loner or That Girl, really cruel. I like her style, I find it fitting somehow. Personality is good, nothing out of order. Oh, love how she's quiet but she can fangirl. I find the likes, dislikes, etc. interesting. Thank you for using A-Pink as your rivals because I don't really like them /is shot by pink pandas/. Everything about Sunggyu is great as well. Nice application, and thank you for applying. Waiting for pasteltear.
Review: OMG, your character is such an introvert! I really like the personality, but I feel there is something missing? Like is there any drive of strength? A dim light that still lights up inside her? Well, no biggie~ I think I'm thinking too much about it...~ Anyways, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE SUNGGYU'S DESCRIPTIONS, IT'S JUST ASDFGHJKL...~ PERFECT! thanks for applying, dearie!
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Review: Here comes the 14 hour torturous piece of work ono bracing myself okey. I like her nicknames, so cute hur hur. Thigh gaps are pretty but not healthy hun ;A; anywho, I love her description and style~ Her personality is good! ouo I AM SO FREAKING DONE WITH YOU, USING MY FAVORITE ULZZANGS AND JIMIN AND RAP MONSTER WHO HAS THE SAME BIRTHDAY AS ME YOU ARE NOT PLAYING FAIR OKAY OKEY. Kris's personality is spot on, I am not surprised ._. I'm done with your application as well /flips it with love/ okay, passing you on. And I read all those crossed out words and suggestions and I'm using them all okey eue
Review: Hello Miint. I find your ethnicity interesting, how she's not full Korean. She seems perfect, almost too perfect but I'll just skip that. Her style is okay. Her personality and Kris's as well are great, thanks for that. I like your brother, he's very handsome. So much beautiful OC friends. I freaking love your choices of rivals thank you very much. Nothing's wrong with this application really, if you could add fashion links would be great! Waiting for pasteltear now.
Review: Annyeong Mint! You have been very desciptive in your basic info on your character have you? I noticed you've misspelled your character's names a bunch of times in the paragraphs, Haneul -> Hanuel. It's ok, not a big problem! So, far everything has been so descriptive...~ Your grammar on your character's personality has been confusing me a bit though...~ OuO Your grammar, umf! -flips table- - It hurts my head.. Your rivals my gawds, such a challenge!~ >.< Anwyays, it's not so bad so I'll just accept you.
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Review: Hello Ky! Oh, your "ulzzang" is so pretty ;u; asdfghjkl and thank you for being the first to use an American model, this might just work out! I like your chara, British ouo just a question, does she have a British accent? I feel guilty but I skim through the triva OTL Oh, so like 2NE1 style clothing, got it X3 Wow, her personality is good. ouo though please keep in mind that intellectual and cunning are different things. Simple background, that's good! Your choice of friends, I like them. I really like your idea ouo passing you on, okay!
Review: Well, your application is perfectly fine ._. um so yeah. /le author getting lazy/
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Review: Hello Peiwen! Thank you for applying. Off the bat, she seems like a decent girl, I really like that ;u; her nickname is so cute too omf. But too me, it kinda seems impossible to be fluent in all three languages? But she's a Virgo so I guess it's possible if she tries hard enough XD Aww her description is really cute, I love it. Your grammar though omf /flips/ I kinda really dislike bad grammar and I usually look it over and I will, but it's just my pet peeve I guess XD
Review: The fluency of the languages oh god. Sorry, I'm just being picky but I'm bilingual and even I'm not fluent for one language. The history / background is interesting and all the drama, yes the drama ugh. Just think about it~ it would be great.
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Review: I LIKE THIS CONCEPT, A TOMBOY GIRL SOBS.
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Review: This better be good omf /getting off my lazy and starting to review/
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Review: Am seriously going to do today, whoop, expect reviews soon.
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