Chapter 1: okay, usually i don't read OC/self-insert/reader-insert fanfictions at all, but this?
this was funny, awesome, cute and i absolutely enjoyed reading it ! :D
Chapter 1: Isn't it awesome when a girl's the one who teaches a guy how to drive! This story's really nice and hey, I'd get distracted, too, if I saw a cute puppy and Jonghyun's colar ;)
Chapter 1: ;~~; I can totally imagine Mr Dinosaur being a clumsy kid that can't drive (not that I'm any better OTL). It's so cute haha, pride and prejudice-like banter.. Ish.. XD.
I don't know.. It's sweet. Something I want to happen... Eugh. Thanks for bringing my dreams into a reality I guess.. At least as close as possible anyways. ;n; .
Ah also, you missed an 'a' in 'as' (so you wrote "as loudly s he could") and a 'd' in 'smiled (he smile)'.
Chapter 1: OMG SO CUTE KYYYYAAA. I can't stop smilling and giggling at the story omg and look at the time! I love everything about it. ''Miss Perfect Score,'' and ''That means only walking-distance dates from now on.'' Great story author-nim!
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