Midnight Without You

Description

A story of a romance that was and its aftermath.  I was thinking of a specific pairing when I wrote this but I'm leaving it open to interpretation.  

There's quite a few layers to this story.  Some of it takes place in the past, some in the present.  Some is told from the guy's perspective, some from the girl's perspective   

Foreword

Late at night the city sleeps

Beneath the lights lie empty streets

Broken dreams and shattered hearts

Lost all alone in the endless dark

 

Ever since that night we first met

I've loved your more than I ever said 

And now you're gone what can I do

Its a damn cold night--it's midnight without you

 

Trying to make sense of it all

Wondering what I did so wrong

Maybe we just were never meant to be

But then why did I fall so completely

A hallway with a million doors

And somehow I walked right through yours

But now it's over and I'm back outside

Praying that you'll come back and change your mind

A lost cause in a million souls

Our perfect love story that was never told

It's the end no matter what else I do

The final page of the story of me and you

It's midnight without you

 

Ever since that night we first met

I've loved your more than I ever said 

And now you're gone what can I do

Its a damn cold night--it's midnight without you

 

Late at night the city sleeps

I walk alone on these empty streets

Trying hard to make it through

The darkest night--midnight without you

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mehmehme #1
Meh Likey!!
poisedon #2
Chapter 3: this an awesome story.... ....
please write more story about monday couple...
and i hope this story will be happy ending...
caesar666
#3
Chapter 3: Author-nim, if it's not much too ask, would you please make the continuation of this story?
With regards, your reader...
rmfanforever #4
Chapter 3: I got a feeling that
Chapter 1 : monday couple
Chapter 2 : gaesicca
Chapter 3 : monday couple
Pls write more monday couple story
rmfanforever #5
Chapter 2: Chaper 1 : monday couple?
Chapter 2: gaessica?
ak4lkjh #6
Chapter 3: Interesting and good writing. Chapter 1 gives me a spartace feel but chapter 3 feels more like mondaycouple. I wonder who you really have in mind when you wrote this.
Rosetta
#7
Chapter 2: This is soooooo good. I wish I could write like you...
Rosetta
#8
Sounds interesting. Update please!