The Man I Loved

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444w

pg-13

kaitao

Zitao embraced Jongin in a tight hug, never wanting to let him go. Of course he knew he’d have to soon; whenever Kai comes back.

 

Foreword

I wrote this a while ago, and I kind of want to make it longer? Maybe like a two-shot? I don't know though.. Can you guys give me your suggestions?

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chizytao
#1
Chapter 1: awww. you should add another chapter. huhu. please author.
nornanoha97
#2
Chapter 1: Aish this was so great!! you should add another chp. I like it please author nim^^
kpopaddict2013
#3
Chapter 1: This fanfic shows how much Kai loves Tao, which makes a great, no excellent combo. (Y)
taokaihun
#4
Chapter 1: This is really good!
You should defo make this longer, pleaseeeee!
lemon-deulop #5
Chapter 1: Oh dear. That's all I have to say. Oh dear. This has so~ much potential to become something more. Please consider writing more in this AU... It would be so heartbreaking to see Zitao struggle with the two very different loves he receives.... Oh ]]]:
krispylays_eater
#6
Chapter 1: Oh yeah please do write another chapter of this, Author-nim! It's really interesting the way Jongin changes and becomes Kai for awhile, and then he'll be the first one again!
Pleasepleaseplease?? *A*
just_trashxx
#7
Chapter 1: continue this..this is good~
G-Eirini
#8
wahh..I think I really like the concept..it kind of creeps me out and I like the ship!Can you do a full story? like more chapters or so? ^^