Chapter 1: Oh wow. This was breathtakingly beautiful. Short and sweet.
I would have loved it to be a little longer though. But I still love it.
The last paragraph was just... wow.
Chapter 1: stupid popcorn wanqi always never comment on my fic blah. i studied like till 3.30am ((i was very distracted by the dust mites in the air and everything else)) i get it im inefficient haha!
It's very literally short and sweet, crammed with emotions and all. I agree with WQ, the beginning could have been a prequel so you can properly expand on the "". As usual, very impressed with your storyline and vocabulary and this story deserves to be read slowly (I sped through I'm sorry) and I LOVEEEEE SUPER LOVE the ending!! <3 it's the kind of bittersweet melancholy sighpie looks at my story and slaps self :(
spamming you with my luv <3 this is too awesome <33333
Chapter 1: Yay okay I'm first! Btw cant understand how you're able to write before dinner... And plus with English essay test somemore.. VERY EFFICIENT HUH
Though I'm sad it's not hunhan or kailu , at least it's exo PHEWW ..thought you've officially jumped over to cclown or sth with your RAY of sunshine
Hahah your stories are either angst or TSK And and your endings are always so cool ( the last two lines wow)
The first two para can totally be written into another prequel
and btw typo at para 4 line 4 ( just saying)
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