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aslyf_ #1
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Chapter 6: username: chanxingbaby
story title: Strictly His
story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/983502/strictly-his-angst-comedy-fluff-romance-exo-love-arragedmarriage

story summary: Agreeing to their parent request of matchmaking them and forwarding the marriage earlier than expected, also coming up with such rules in order to get married peacefully causes them to fall for each other in the end. As their feelings grew for each other, things wasn't smooth as expected bad things slowly arises, breaking them apart from the case of their exes to their trust issues, nothing just went right. The hurt was unbearable that Oh Sera filed a divorced paper and ran to Beijing as student exchanged. For that 1 year she tried to mend that hurting heart of hers, what she expected when she return wasn't what she think will be because She found out that she's still Park Chanyeol's wife. All this while, Park Chanyeol been supporting her in terms of money, living and having a bodyguard to keep eye of her safety in foreign country. She dying to know why?! why he did that? Why she still being tied with that guy that she never thought will ever hurt her after being confessed.


What will happened to Oh Sera?

Will Park chanyeol gain her love and trust back?

Can they finally live happily ever after?

characters/pairings: YeolRa (Chanyeol+Sera)
story length: 5 chapters including prologue (status: Ongoing)
genre(s): angst comedy fluff romance
additional comments (is english your first language etc): English is my first language though but I'm super bad at Vocab & Grammar after 6 years of hiatus from writing. Let me know directly how the story goes... I'm open to all kind of comment just to improve it for next coming chapters.
password: aeternalis
milkeuti #3
username: milkeuti
story title: A White Tulip
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/924575/a-white-tulip-drama-friendship-romance-sad-sliceoflife-zelo-bap
story summary: Most people tell you to follow your heart. But what do you do when following your heart also means throwing away everything you have; your friends, your reputation, and your presence? For 16-year old Yoo Minhae, it might as well be making the most difficult decision of her life. Befriending him brought her love and happiness, as well as loss and pain. But as he says it, "we'll make it through everything together."
characters/pairings: zeloxoc
story length: currently six chapters + prologue
genre(s): slightangst, tragedy, slice of life, friendship/romance,
additional comments (is english your first language etc): english is my first length, and currently the story is being brought back to life (working on the next chapter!) and i would rlly like to improve my writing for my readers haha. thanks in advance~
password: aeternalis
choimiah #4
username: --choimiah
story title: Glass Corpse
story link: {http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/885551/glass-corpse-editing-youngjae-fantasyau-2jae-jaebumjb-jackson-got7}
story summary: Youngjae is a hemophiliac teen living in a bubble of dysfunction. His bitter, dark humor towards his situation is the only thing that keeps his boat of sanity afloat. Strange circumstances land him in an even stranger position, forced to believe and trust.
characters/pairings: Youngjae(got)xJaebum(got7)+side-main Jackson and rest of got7 in supporting roles
story length:20 chapters, plus an epilogue
genre(s): fantasy, romance, slice of life(kinda)
additional comments (is english your first language etc): The little '-' next to the chapter titles is for me to remember how many times I've gone back and edited it. I'm aware of the dialogue errors I've made like apostrophe vs. period. Thank you! ^-^
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About to message you about my application!
sungyeonaaah #6
Chapter 11: Hey, urm, I found the form link in the comment replies so if you're still accepting applications I'm applying ^^
ft_stars #7
Chapter 11: Although the hiring requirements said the password is Myungsoo, I still put Daehyun there ;;
I read the requirements.
ft_stars #8
Chapter 11: I can't see the application form ;m;
Or maybe it's just my eyes.
--Enchantress #9
Erm, are u guys still hiring graphic designers ?!
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