Trapped

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Ain’t no light, what I hear is a gunshot. Under the black sky, the scream and shout spread. Making my body and head cold like ice. Even though my breath is running out, I keep running.”

[Black Paradise by Beast]

 

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No matter how brave he thought he would be, no matter how tough he thought he would be, he could still feel... fear. The anxious feeling he felt. He kept on running.

The fear that made him couldn’t close his eyes,

The fear that made his body trembled,

The fear that made him shivered with cold sweats,

The fear that couldn’t get out from his mind,

The image of her that he couldn’t forget...

Suho was in fear.

 

 

Foreword

Prologue;

Suho was on his way to do his assignment that gave or rather ordered by his senior. He didn’t really care to do the assignment though, but he was more care because he had to do it by himself. In other word, he was alone. He knew it was because he was new on the team, and technically being the junior in his work place. He got bullied in a transparent way; it’s not that he didn’t notice it. It was culture and there’s nothing he could change it. He didn’t say a word, he didn’t argue, he was afraid he might lose his new job.

Suho looked at the piece of paper in his hand and sighed deeply. “Where the hell is this?”

Suho then just shrugged it off, knowing that he might late with his appointment. He then typed the location address in his navigator and let it process to show it way. In a few seconds, a female voice was heard, and he was ready to drive.

 


 

Suho walked out from his car and took his things – briefcase. He looked in front him, an old yet big factory. He looked around him. It was quite empty. It was late after all hence most of the worker might go home already. He still didn’t get it though, why the appointment was late in the night. It didn’t feel... right.

 As soon as Suho entered the building, he felt a shivering feeling. It was cold. Ignoring what he felt, he went straight toward the counter. “Excuse me, miss.” He said as he greeted the lady behind the counter. She wore dark blue jacket – probably the company jacket – and he noticed the shiny dolphin necklace that she wore. It felt somehow familiar. “May I know where Mr. Jun’s room? I made an appointment with him.”

The lady tapped her and there, Suho lost interest on it. “It’s B002. You can take that elevator there.” She said and showed to one point – the elevator.

“Thank you.” Suho bowed slightly and walked toward the elevator.

As Suho was waiting for the elevator, he couldn’t help but felt a pair of eyes was staring at him. It felt like someone was watching him. He could felt it. When he turned behind slowly, there was nothing. He then couldn’t feel it anymore. He raised his eyebrow, confused. “Weird...” he mumbled.

Ting – the elevator sound. Suho noticed the light blinked and the door opened. He didn’t hesitate to walk in. As soon as he walked in, he touched the button labeled ‘B’ and waited for the close to close.

“Wait!”

As if it was an impulse, Suho immediately touched the freeze button making the door still on opening for the person to come in. It was a... she.

The person or rather she runs in the elevator with heavy breath. Suho looked at her as he released his finger from the intercom.

“Thank you, sir.” The lady thanked him. She was beautiful, he thought.

“You’re welcome.” It was silent for a little while as Suho kept his eyes on the blinked light of letters.

“Hey, I never see you before. Are you new here?” The lady then said breaking the cold icy silent. She was being friendly in his thought.

Suho shook his head. “No, I don’t work here but I’m meeting someone.” He showed his pass – visitor pass – to her.

“I see...” The lady nodded her head. “I’m Yun Mira by the way.”

Mira. Suho felt somehow shivered knowing her name. Weird. “Kim Joonmyeon, but better known as Suho.” He told his real name. Somehow his mouth was comfortable said it as if he used to it. “It’s quite late. Why are you still working?”

Mira sighed, softly. “I had to since there’s lots of work to be done.”

“Oh, you must be tired.”

“I am but I have no choice.” Mira smiled. “It’s my job.”

Suho fascinated with her somehow. He felt her hard work was beautiful just like the person itself. He thought that Mira was beautiful. The long straight hair till her shoulder, black in colour matched her pale yet fresh face. “Fighting!” he encouraged her. It felt so necessary to do so. It felt that he just had to do so.

“Your floor,” Mira said as the door opened. She was still smiling.

Suho chose to give her his smile. As he walked out from the elevator, he felt empty of all the sudden. Is it because he didn’t want to go? Is it because he wanted to stay by her side? For such a little time, he felt wasted. He should talk more. He should know her more. Can we even see each other again after this?

As Suho bid his goodbye with half-hearted, Mira then said. “My level is D, you can come if you want too.”

The elevator’s door then closed and Suho saw the reflection of himself. He then smiled.

 


 

♔ B.A.PFinitExo (Chemistry) One-Shot Contest ♔

HELLO!

This is a story that I made for a writing contest made by fiqadongwoo. Haha, as a warning, I’m telling you guys that this is my very first attempt at making a horror story so it might be sloppy and less horror – something like that. I don’t even know why I chose this either considering that I pretty much hate horror. Weird, right? Anyways, I’m just trying out here and hopefully it’s satisfied my beautiful readers. Enjoyed and commented it.

 

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Heartgrind
#1
Very intense! Glad I read it! Thank you very much!
SNSDGoddess #2
Chapter 1: this was so dark. but so good. i'm going to do read it one more time :3
cumi94 #3
Chapter 1: Wow. This is mindblowing.
FISHHEADBB8 #4
I have no regret on spending a little time to read this story and hit subscribe.This story should be featured.It's awesome.
EXOBLAST
#5
Chapter 1: This is the first horror story that sent me the shivers. You did a really good job, thumbs up for you. Though, some parts made me laugh a bit. Can ghost roll their eyes? Haha, other than that the ending was very unexpected in a good way. That's one thing I love in a story. I hope you continue to make stories like this. :) Well done.
LoloLuvsBacon2
#6
Great story. It sounds wondiferous
exo_lobo #7
Chapter 1: WOW!! this story is AWESOME!!! 1st time i read a story with so many emotions!
exojjang123
#8
Chapter 1: Wahh!! Daebak! ^_^ Please update! Very interesting. :) Best fan fic and alot of different kinds of emotions. :D I love it! >.<
HYONISAH #9
Chapter 1: This story is awesome!!!!
I felt so many different types of emotions while reading this. It was sweet at first and then creepy, then suddenly it became super horrifying and ended sadly.
I'm glad I found this story. Hope you continue writing like this. :)