Chapter 1: thanks for sharing such a beautiful story :)

Chapter 1: this is beautiful! :D reminds me of the first time I rode a horse by myself.

Chapter 1: Beautiful!!*O*

Chapter 1: u need to put better tags or not many people will come across this
and THEY NEED TO
i guess u have a style of writing and its pleasant to read
if i have to say then there is something innocent about it and so pure
again i like how u used the scenario, not the normal ones u see in fic's
i love how u emphasis on the smile (its what i find most attractive about a person)
it was cute and sort of romantic, riding a horse with a guy <3 the thought itself makes me go insane
P.S- i love horses too and i could relate in an odd way to the girl in the story

Loved it! (: