Last Ones

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TRUST IS ONE IMPORTANT THING IF YOU'RE ONE OF THE LAST HUMANS ON EARTH        

×Teaser

• I let out some swear words and tried to get up. "Umma?! Where are you?!"

A squeaking sound was behind me and when I turned around something hit my head. I knocked out immediately.


• "You got me, yes, now stop touching me."

"Ouh~ no~! Queen Mija hates me once more! How can I live from now on?!" Jay started to fake sob and I laughed loudly, hitting him.


• "Zero?" I asked and he started laughing loudly. "Yes, I'm hero!"

I held my chest over my laughter and spotted my favorite mall. "Let's go there!"

Foreword

CHARACTERS

SONG MIJA × [LEAD]

YOU'RE ONE TOUGH, SOMETIMES HOT-TEMPERED GIRL. YOU LIKE TO LAUGH 
AND TRY TO ENJOY YOUR LIFE. YOU DONT LIKE ANYBODY NAGGING AT YOU
ESPECIALLY FAMILY. BAD THING, YOU CAN'T REALLY TAKE CARE OF YOUR
OWN. YOU DO HAVE YOUR OWN LITTLE FLAT, YET YOU'RE USED TO YOUR
MOM TAKING CARE OF YOU, SO YOU OFTEN STAY OVER AT YOUR FAMILY'S
HOUSE. YOU HAVE A BOYFRIEND CALLED YOON DOOJOON. YOU'RE DATING
EACH OTHER FOR ABOUT A YEAR NOW. YOU WEREN'T SURE ABOUT IT, BUT
MAYBE LOVE WOULD WORK OUT ITSELF, WOULDN'T IT?

 

 

 

PARK JAEBUM ( JAY PARK ) × [LEAD]

HE'S A SINGER AND RAPPER IN KOREA. HE'S SOMEWHAT OF A BADASS BUT
CAN BE NICE AS WELL IF YOU'RE FRIENDS WITH HIM. JAEBUM, OR HOW HE
PREFERS TO BE CALLED, JAY, IS A PARTY-HUMAN. WHEREVER A PARTY IS,
JAY IS THERE. JAY IS A LOUD AND FUNNY PERSON, SOMETIMES EVEN A BIT
ARROGANT AND A DICKHEAD. GIRLS FALL FOR HIM LIKE STONES INTO WATER
AND HE BRINGS HOME GIRLS ALMOST EVERY NIGHT. BECAUSE HE MAKES
PARTY CLOSE TO EVERY DAY HE'S REALLY BAD AT KEEPING HIS APARTMENT
CLEAN AND ALSO, HE BUYS FAST FOOD A LOT, RARELY COOKS BY HIMSELF.

 

 

 

CHOI MINHO × [CAMEO]

MINHO IS A CUTE YET CHARISMATIC YOUNG MAN WHO TREATED YOUR WOUNDS
WHEN YOU WERE INJURED. HE HAS A SISTER AND LOVES HER MUCH. HE WANTS
TO BECOME A DOCTOR YET HE DOESN'T GET A JOB THOUGH. MINHO KEEPS A SECRET
WITH HIM. YOU KNOW HE HAS ONE, BUT HE WOULD NEVER TELL YOU, HE SAID.

 


OTHERS × [BABY  MAYBE  THEY'LL  APPEAR]

 

 

AUTHOR'S × NOTE )

WELL HELLO HERE AND THERRRE, IT'S MINIE-- HERE WITH A NEW STORY
I GOT THIS IDEA DURING SOCIAL STUDIES IN SCHOOL TBH, I WAS THINKING
OF A ONE SHOT BUT THEN AGAIN...IT WOULD'VE BEEN TOO SHORT, YET,
A WHOLE STORY WAS TOO MUCH AS WELL, SO, THIS WON'T HAVE A LOT CHAPTERS,
BUT MORE THAN JUST 4 OR SO, I SUPPOSE, I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY THIS

I ING LOVE JAY PARK I MEAN JUST LOOK AT HIM ASDFGHJKL THANK YOU.

 

× CREDITS TO THE POSTERS AND LAYOUT TO ME THAT IDIOT AND ALSO
× IF SOMETHING IS SIMILAR TO ANOTHER STORY IT IS PURE COINCIDENCE

 

stephhh-
decided to update the first chp today C:

Comments

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-sleeqi--
#1
Chapter 2: ahahaha yeah Bieber :'D
-sleeqi--
#2
Chapter 1: so much action! dongsaeng! I totally love it!
Please update soon >_< ♥
-lights
#3
Chapter 1: filled with action and totally mind blowing...I don't know what to say...
I want to cry, tell Mija I'd help her if I could and cheer Minho up ;A;
just wow!
Nyaikou
#4
Chapter 1: The text and formatting is lovely may I say :) I thought this would be a typical story but with this apocalypse it sounds like Derren Brown's Apocalypse ㅋㅋㅋ Although it's not my type of story, sorry >_< For improvements on editing this chapter, I think you need to seperate some dialogue when each person is speaking e.g .

*"I just want to stay in Korea, thank you."

A woman walked out of *the bus. "Are you the last ones here for the Japan trip?"

There were some grammar mistakes I noticed from the beginning too e.g "Can I sit next to the window." should be a ? And not a .

Of course it's just your first chapter but I'm sure your story will get better and you'll get loads more readers who will be interested in it! Good luck :)
-lights
#5
can't wait for the first chapter~
hwaiting saengie ♥