I don't want to be just your brother

Description

Gongchan loves Shinwoo. He always do. Shinwoo knows Gongchan loves him but told him he's just a brother. Jinyoung loves Shinwoo too and Shinwoo knows also. Just who does he love? Why won't he accept Gongchan? Does he like Jinyoung? Who will he end up with?

Foreword

Omg omg I'm breaking my rules! My first B1A4 fic instead of my usual Teen Top(L.Joe) ones! I still love my ChunJoe. I'm just feeling desperate because i can't find my fave B1A4 OTP ones(except for the scarce few) so here i am, writing my first and not sure if its my last B1A4 fic. WARNING: ! Don't read if you don't like . This is my second time writing and I'm still gaining writing experience so dont be too harsh on me! Don't be stingy! Comment generously! And also, subscribe! Cheers! ^^

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ochan_desu
#1
Chapter 1: Wah, triangle XD
I like it! Kkkk.
It's cute. And I absolutely love the ending. I favor ShinChan XD

But, I don't really like how you write the paragraphs. My eyes isn't normal. The long passage's kind of making my eyes teary :(

It would be nice if you separate them in different paragraph every five or so rows. The colored sentences are good, though. It helps my eyes to adapt with the long passage X3