Abandoned, Yet Again [ONESHOT]

Description

Neglect, revenge, poverty, and jealousy. 

She's been through it all, but what she feared most in life was abandonment. 

Yet, she encountered it.

Over and over again. 

 

Foreword

 

After he left, I had nothing.

Brewing in me was the pain that I had endured for so long.

Anyone could've lived this life, but why did it have to be me?

Never will I let anything like this happen again.

Death will be the only thing that holds me back.

Only when nobody has want I want will I stop.

 Nothing will get in my way.

Ever.

Don't deceive me.

 

WARNING: Contains material that might be unsuitable for some readers. Read at your own risk.

*Author's Note* Currently undergoing a major editing phase, so please excuse the horrible writing. Feel free to leave constructive criticism to help me improve it!

 

 

 

CREDITS

Written for "Fearless" A One-Shot Writing Contest 

Reviewed by cherrylisa from Awkward Tokki Reviews Shop

Reviewed by handsomepaul from Second Confession Request Shop

Reviewed by Circee from Green Apple Graphics Shop

Reviewed by panda_and_llama

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MinJae-noona #1
Chapter 1: now, what the actual crap just happened?? o_____o
magnificentoreox
#2
Chapter 1: Umm. Why is it kim yumi and not byun? 0.0 nevertheless, great story. Totally screwed my mind up! Haha
xiseyre #3
Chapter 1: Your story was Mind boggling! Amazing story there! So unlike any others. Perfect and an attention grasp. !
HearMeThroughMusic
#4
Chapter 1: holy ____.....
kpopFANatic201
#5
Hi you requested a reviewer!
Here I am~
I just thought I'd warn you that I'm a bit of a grammar nazi lol. Ill pm you my final review okay ^^
Sevana12
#6
Chapter 1: This is wow just beautiful! Good job!
NaughtyCasserole
#7
Chapter 1: WHOAAA. That...that was flippen amazing. It was so original and well written. ;_____;
My goodness. I just can't...GURL, I CAN'T EXPLAIN WHADDA FEEL.
I just loved it so so so much. i_i