I Blew My Chance

Stupid Love, Why Don't You Just Die?
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KYUHYUN'S POV 
Did I heard her right? She said she'll think about me?! I, the one and only Cho Kyuhyun? 

I felt my lips curving upward with what she said. I was about to say something when she suddenly stood up. 

"wh-where are you going?" I asked her as I saw her eyes pooling up with... Tears. 

"I-I need to go" she said when I took my wallet out, paying for the food even though we haven't eaten. We have ordered something after all, therefore we should pay. 

I finally caught up with her near my car, holding her hand to stop her from walking. 



"what's wrong?" I asked, turning her around just to see tears uncontrollably falling out from her eyes. "why are you crying?" I asked, using my thumb to wipe her tears. 

"why didn't you tell me?" she asked, almost harshly. 

"tell you what?" I asked, confused. 

"that I loved you before?!" 

"h-huh? Ho-how did you know?" I asked, almost whispering. "did you perhaps--" she cut me off by nodding. My hand quickly fell off her sides, feeling weak all of a sudden. She then turned her back to me and began walking once again. But snapping back to my senses, I walked up to her, pulling her into a warm hug. 

"I'm sorry. I'm so sorry" I said in the most sincere voice I have. She just stood there, frozen, not even hugging me back. "sorry for all the pain that I've caused you." I continued, hoping that she's still in her right mind and listening to me. 

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juliia #1
Chapter 82: I really love this story
saracho
#2
Chapter 67: WOW you are pretty :-)
prettier then me... LOL
haHAEhihohu
#3
Chapter 82: waaah.. as the others said, your story is really great! I love it. <3 .. The ending might not be the one I'm expecting (since I'm Hae biased kekeke) but still.. are you going to write a sequel for this? coz the ending is sort of like... open ending.. hehe.. anyway, good job!! ^^
uniquegirl
#4
Chapter 82: It's a great story! I loved it. The ending is really unexpected though. I hope there will be a sequel 'cause I want to know who she will choose! Thanks for making this story XD
Lee_TanHae #5
Its a really REALLY GREAT STORY!! By the way new user here :) hmmmm is there will be a sequel for this story well.. Most of us are begging you couse this storr is really great if there would be a sequel we would be excited REALLY!!!! ATE SANA GUMAWA KA NG SEQUEL NITO:))) ang Ganda kasi (ehhhh dba pinayka ate?) hehe
SUPER_JUNIOR_ELF
#6
Chapter 82: Wow. I cant put the description of this story into words. It was so good I just want to keep reading more, but its over! Just a question... Sequel any time soon? Im looking foreward to it if there is!! Everything was so unexpected and I really like that about this story. <3 Keep it up! Saranghae~
yeollercoaster_ #7
Chapter 82: Oh my gosh.... This was amazing T_T sequelllll???????
poop_reader11 #8
Chapter 82: I know late but I just wanted you to know that I LOVE your story. The ending is so unexpexted and everything is just so perfect. I can't say a thing anymore cause everything a reader wanted is here.

Just out of curiousity, are you planning on making a part two about this fic? Cause if yes I'll be waiting for the other fic I love you saranghe~♡
dreamwriter_97
#9
Chapter 82: Whoa, THAT, I was so not expecting o-o Maggy really left?! And OMG AS MY LAST COMMENT SAID LEE DONGHAEEE MICHYEOSSO?! FISHY U HAVE THE BIGGEST HEART BUT HALF A BRAIN ATM D: aish! I can sort of understand, but at the same time, WAEYO...WAAAEEEYYOOOOOOO T^T and kyuhyun...well at least kyuhyun finally stopped hiding and FINALLY starts to step up! :D this is really different from other endings, but in a good way! Haha it keeps us thinking ;3 WAAAAH, ITS SO WEIRD SEEING THIS STORY COME TO AN END...

Lol i didnt expect to see my user either ^^ glad my crazy comments r helping LOL and forget the haters, cause seriously, how can you NOT be a good writer and get so many subbies and spazzers to the story otherwise neh? Just keep doin what ur doin :) i know how hard it is to think of an original story, start it, update and keep with it til the end, so for that KUDOS, cause I thoroughly enjoyed the story and our lovely sometimes face palm worthy characters haha! I'll miss this story a lot and if I ever need a dose of fluff and drama I'll go back to this <3