Heaven is a place on Earth for You.

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Here's my very first writting in english :D

It was for a contest, so it's pretty short (I'm not used to it, so .. I don't know how, but it ended as a very fluffy thing xD) and I'm sure there are mistakes so please, be nice to me and correct what it has to be corrected ;) I really want to improve ~

So ... what can I tell about it ... There will be a side story (actually, I wrote a drabble and a one-shot for the contest. This is the one-shot, and the side story is the drabble) with Minho's point of view ;) and ... It's really short, so I'm wondering if I should continue it ... As a fic I mean. Or I don't know, something longer. In french, I never write such a short thing, so it bother me xD

But anyways : Enjoy & Comment please :D  

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susumiya08 #1
Chapter 2: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww just sooooo fluffy!!! lolol I'm happy now!! ^w^ don't worry even if it's short, made me all fluffy and made me feel, so I guess is ok,keep writing!!!

mmm....I guess the last guy was minho?... if it was... then,too bad dude, they're just perfect, deal with it.lol poor minho
EmryxX #2
Chapter 2: The second chapter I think really captured a realistic point of view. :]
EmryxX #3
Chapter 1: My heart melted sweetly into a heavenly abyss after reading this. I love how great your English is! Learning another language can be so hard. :b Don't worry about length. Focus on the story. Sometimes stories are short, sometimes stories are long. Honestly, don't let the length of your story play as much as an importance as your writing. Enjoy the flow of your creativity and have fun doing so. :D Onto the next chapter!
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