Helloooo! I am soo pumped for this story.  Are you as excited as I am? lol  I LOVE DBSK!!!!!

Anyways..... I just wanted to tell you all that I LOVE constructive critism, but please still be nice/respectiful.

And if you want to suggest any of your own story's you have written, I would be glad to read them.

JaeJo0ng (Hero) Age: 21

-Caring, kind, and motherly person.

-Doeshe like Shin as a sister or something more?

YunHo (U-know) Age: 21

-Tought, fatherly, and orderly person

-She Shin as someone who needs help, and he wants to be the person to help her.

YooChun (Michey) Age: 20

- Rich spoiled brat, and acts  like one (sorry Michey fans!)

-Sees Shin as an annoyance...or does he?

Junsu (Xiah) Age: Almost 20

-Funny, hyper, and causes trouble

-Sees Shin as a girl with possibilities.

ChangMin (Max) Age: 18

-Sweet, concerened, and sick of being the Magnae

-Determined to help Shin, likes her a lot.

Doctor John, Age: Ummm....kind of young, but old enough (how vague of me lol)

-Born and raised in America, came to Korea after he got his degree for being a doctor

-Is married and has four kids

-Thinks of, and treats Shin as his own daughter.

Mae Shin, Age: 16

-Hardly speaks but not just becuase she is shy.

-Has many life threatening medical condictions.

-Is very talented in writing poetry/storie, playing piano, and speaking/reading/writing in both Japanese and English.

This story is happy and comical, but also sad and dramatic.  Lots of emotions ans problems, and teaching us that

can get through anything with a little help from our friends.  You should also know that the story of  Mae Shin is complete fiction.  Yet, it is sad to say that real people in this worls have had these conflicts in their lives.

Please enjoy my story....