Twenty Tears For You

Description

Everyone lives their life. Whether it's in despair, or in joy. Whether they live it to the fullest, or let it waste by. But everyone also has to die. Sometimes you don't know what you have until you lost it. Until you lost everything. Yongguk, when you died I cried. I will admit it, the tears flowed out, knowing that I will never see you again. Your perfect smile, your loving eyes, your warmth next to me. Yongguk, these are my twenty tears for you.

 

Our time together flew by. Just like the how the notes on a piano flow freely. You changed me, and I will never forget you.

Foreword

"You only have last chance you know."

-Yongguk, BAP's One Shot 

 

There is nothing you can do for me. I told you that I didn't want to know you. Yet you still persisted. Staying with me, and teaching me things that I never knew before. Making me think, and feel things that I didn't want to, but liked anyways. You made me trust you, you made me fall in love with you. Then you go and leave me.

 

 

 

Author's Note:

Um...hi? Hahaha please do support this story^^ I am sincerly sorry about my horrible English. But I love Yongguk, and I love writing, so I must to do it kekeke~

Thanks to Miso Ensoleillé ☼ - ＧＲＡＰＨＩＣＳ for the poster and background

Thanks to ┇❉Pandamonium Reviews❉ ┇ for the lovely review.

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LocketKay #1
Chapter 3: This is good so far! So much potential!
Update soon? :)
FlamingJewels #2
Chapter 1: Really! I can't believe that English is your THIRD language, are you sure!^^

What's your first and second then! :P
--iSoul #3
Chapter 2: woah i think i can rely on you for piano music to listen to from now on. like, i really adore the piano but can't play it..sadly. ; n ;

great writing so far! one thing i would suggest though is finding different ways to start your sentences. I read through and a lot of them started with "I" and then blah blah blah. Try starting it off a different way since it can be boring with that repetition. For example, instead of the way you wrote you, you can get rid of the extra "I" and short last sentence by saying "My old friends always had a look of pity (....blah blah blah)hang around them, so I stopped - afterall - I don't need any pity."
soo yeah. just a few suggestions but really good start so far! O u O
_xUnbreakablex_ #4
Chapter 2: I think this story is beautiful :DDD

Update soon~ ^^
-notyourself #5
update soon :)
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