Mine

Description

Jongin is smoke and Luhan the one that chases him. Written for The Sky is the Limit, Round 3: March Madness, subround 1.

Foreword

"I've broken a few hearts in my times, but we've all done that, so I'm nothing special in that regard. I'm a boring heartbreaker, at that, because I've never abandoned one woman for another. I never dated or married more than one woman at a time. I didn't break hearts into pieces overnight. I broke them slowly and carefully. I didn't set any land speed records running out the door. Piece by piece, I disappeared. And I've been disappearing ever since." ~Sherman Alexie ("What You Pawn I Will Redeem")

A/N: Written for The Sky is the Limit. I actually had trouble getting inspired by a prompt this long, so I focused this story mostly on the second half, about disappearing.

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sweet-and-cookies
#1
Chapter 1: This was written beautifully<3 And the raw emotions that Luhan feels gives me the chills.....
thepurpleberry
#2
Chapter 1: the emotions portrayed were so strong.... ;;;;; and I think the ending bit was perfect, how luhan pretendes that jongin is with him. so sad...
Charavivre
#3
Chapter 1: Oh God, this was really sad,but you were able to portray the feeling of a heartbreak so well and with great sensitivity!I felt so sorry for Luhan. This oneshot reminded me just how painful and cruel love can be. I'm glad I haven't expierenced anything like this.