Before The Paradise

Description

 

“What if you died for man you never loved?”

 

                It was common practice. Their sons would die of accidents, fights, or other causes and they would come to the temple, riddled in grief, but searching. They would look at the various girls, select one, and hand it to the owner who would merely smile and lead them to his office: it was business.

                Then, few days later, another girl would disappear, like she had never been there before.

Foreword

The Info

This is an entry for ❝ Fearless ❞ A One-Shot Writing Contest, story idea adopted from  I Came to Read, I Stayed to Write.  Poster and BG from  Miso Ensoleillé ☼ - GRAPHICS

The idea for the story  is related to a Chinese tradition, where you place one's while with whoever passed to the afterlife, so they'll never be alone; but there are many sons who die without wives, so parents will pay a man for his service to kill a woman and bury her body in a traditional wedding dress with the "groom". 

I hope you like it and thanks for reading!

NO COPYING PLEASE

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sendohime #1
Chapter 1: Alright I read this once and I definitely should've commented before! I loved this one shot, it was very abstract and touching. Although it was sad and selfish of the parents, this really got into the heart of tradition and you had the perfect amount of brooding angst. Poor girl, at least Myungsoo was tolerable and accepted his parents wishes of a bride whom he doesn't know the name of. Great one shot!
akared #2
Chapter 1: oohhh...
i kind of....not so understand, but nice one!