Chapter 1: Story Title: Time Is Finite
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/886542/time-is-finite-friendship-romance-sliceoflife-originalcharacter-exo-sehun-jongin
Reviewer: secretseven
Poster/Trailer URL: http://i.imgur.com/CFijKe1.png
Genre: Romance
Brief Synopsis: Lee Arang fears change as much as she says otherwise, as change means growing up and growing up means Sehun and Jongin could leave, for Arang has made Jongin her home and given Sehun her heart.
Two Chapters you require to be reviewed: Chapter 7 and 9
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I have allowed TEXT SELECTION in my story for review and understand that I will not earn a grade here. (caleesia)

Chapter 25: So first of all, thank you for giving a lot of time to write this thoughtful review. As I read also in your note in the next chapter, I hope things will get better for you and I actually read this review since this morning, but I personally need to let myself organise my thoughts to give you a proper feedback because I do take critics harshly, but I understand that all the words above are meant for my improvement in becoming a better writer.
For the reviews that you read, I actually didn't really read too much about myself not being placed in the same position with the native English speakers, however I thank you for pointing that out for me. I always pay more attention for the pointers and the flaws I need to improve more than the praises they gave (praises are lovely, but of course what matter truly are the flaws so my story can be improved, also goes the same for my writing).
So, I'm going to give my feedback about the whole sections since there are a lot of questions appearing and I feel the need to explain some points, and I feel that this is one of the ways I can show you my appreciation for this review you have written for me, so here it goes.

Chapter 25: Okay, so I did not read the entire review (I skimmed through the plot section, seeing as I don't want to spoil the story for myself) and focused on the title section and the writing style section (and so forth). I appreciate these long reviews you write because even your ramblings are something to take into consideration. It's like you're acting as both the average reader and the critic. Anyways, as I was saying, this story has been on my radar for some time and I liked the title at first glance, but something about it put me off too. Your review hit the sore spot! As for the rest, I can relate. I tend to get wordy and dwell on ideas for too long. I often have to tone down my unnecessary word choices and whatnot. OTL. Writing IS rewriting. Bless any author who is brave enough to share their work.

Chapter 1: Story Title: i am leaving you
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1104993/i-am-leaving-you-angst-krystal-romance-exo-kai-jongin-kaistal
Reviewer (please choose one): secretseven
Poster/Trailer URL (if available): -
Genre: romance, angst
Brief Synopsis: Jongin is the rich boy who breaks people’s heart. Soojung is the best friend he shares kisses and blanket with. When the doctor says that Soojung is dying, all Jongin can hear is his father saying: she is not worth of us. “I spend the last ten years defying my father to hang out with low life like you and now you are dying on me? I am not going to throw everything for something that decays so easy.”
It always cross his mind to leave her behind—alone and lonely—before she does the same to him. Both Jongin and Soojung are fighting not to be the one who gets left behind.
Two Chapters you require to be reviewed: it's a oneshot.
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I have allowed TEXT SELECTION in my story for review and understand that I will not earn a grade here. (byharu)

Chapter 1:
Story Title: Gehenna
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/932501/gehenna-angst-jaejoong-mystery-yunho-yunjae
Reviewer: secretseven
Poster/Trailer URL: poster: http://i68.tinypic.com/2wok705.jpg ; trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91cTASV4lXw
Genre: angst
Brief Synopsis: Kim Jaejoong is not actually human and has been on Earth for far too long. Jung Yunho is his new personal assistant and Jaejoong falls in love for the first time.
Two Chapters you require to be reviewed: 19 and 21
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I have allowed TEXT SELECTION in my story for review and understand that I will not earn a grade here. (dhaatk)

Chapter 24: THIS: taking out oppa because "it's annoying" is not a light bulb---it's turning away from cultural implications.
*applauds*
A line that I often see in reviews: "I understand this story takes place in Korea, but since you're writing in English, using oppa (blah blah) is annoying."

Chapter 14: Story Title: Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1096181/allegro-young-blood-and-electric-blue-skies-angst-krystal-romance-seulgi-mingyu-seventeen-wonwoo
Reviewer (please choose one): secretseven
Genre: angst, coming-of-age, romance, psychological, friendship.
Brief Synopsis: Jeon Wonwoo stops believing in everything when the people he thought would always stay, left and slipped away from his fingers. And then Seulgi comes, in the form of feline eyes and fluid movements, beneath the electric blue skies that soon will remind him of her.
Chapters you need reviewed: 1 and 2
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What do you think is the strongest point of your story?
My way of writing that is able to picture the innocence of a teenager.
I understand that I will not earn a grade here. (douxsoleil)
Hi there! To be honest, I am using a one person point of view (which I never touched upon as I usually use the third person pov) in my story and I would like to hear your thoughts if I manage to pull it off, and please be honest with me as I hope to become better with your review. Anyway, I hope you enjoy my story at the same time. Thank you!

Chapter 22: "You see narrative techniques often break grammatical rules. But this doesn't mean it's wrong, if you know what you are breaking and you can convince your reader that it's more for effect than from carelessness. This is the difference between a grammatical error and narrative techniques. "

YES. YES. YES. One in a while, I would break my story into fragments as a narrative technique. I had one reviewer point out that they were fragments (obviously) and I was daunted in the face because it was the character narrating how they were choking on milk. So yep, not everyone will like how you write nor will they understand the emphasis you're trying to convey.

Anyways, this chapter was entertaining!