Chapter 1: ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

Chapter 1: i want someone like hyukjae,,, :)) this is so sweet,,

Chapter 1: I cried… you are good

Chapter 1: I loved EH, for be the only one that get to see the real DH and taking care of him.

Chapter 1: I really like how you wrote this! I was hesitant to read it because it's angst with one tagged character, but I'm really glad that I did.

I like that this day was like every other day but Donghae's emotions had built up enough for him to feel this way. I like how you wrote his feelings throughout the story, and what he was thinking.

Of course, I like that Hyukjae was there to comfort him.

You did a good job with this! There were some spelling errors (loose=lose, sooth=soothe, to=too). I really enjoyed reading it!

~Wishes of health and happiness,
雪のカラ

Chapter 1: You managed to bring me to tears in just a few paragraphs. I absolutely loved it. Absolutely.