♔--Ambiguity | Review Shop [CLOSED!]

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--ambiguity.

ambiguity(noun):

1.
doubtfulness or uncertainty of meaning or intention.
2.
an unclear, indefinite, or equivocal word,expression, meaning,etc.

 

 

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♔ About ♔

Hello, this is MessyBuns and TheAsianNoob, and we have decided to open this shop to review some stories on AFF. We have been reading stories on this site for quite a while, and we have realised that a lot of writers don't know how to write... It could be because English is not their first language, or maybe because nobody has ever correted their mistakes, but that does not mean there is no hope for these writers! There is always room for improvement, they only need to realise their mistakes, correct them and make better stories in the future. Personally, (MessyBuns), as a reviewer, I am quite serious and straight to the point, but I am by no means harsh or mean. We have not created this shop to criticize your story, but to help you improve it.

♔ The simple Rules ♔ 

1. Subscribe! Also, it's quite rude if you unsubscribe after you have received your review.

2. You can request in other shops, I don't have any problem with that.

3. Fill in the form correctly. 

4. PM one of us if you want to ask something.

5. Please credit.

6. The password is blueberrymuffinsaredelicious.

7. Please be patient because we are human beings and we have many prior commitments that require our attention.We will try our best to attend to your request as soon as possible, though :)

8. I have changed my mind, the password is now blueberrymuffinssuck.

9.You can request for a particular reviewer to review your story

10. No bashing, please. 

 

 

♔ Form ♔

Story’s title:

Story’s link:

Characters:

Genre:

Status: (On-going/completed/one shot):

Reviewer:

Password:

♔Rubric♔

1.Title (/5)

2.Foreword & Description (/10)

3.Characterization (/10)

4.Originality (/15)

5.Plot (/15)

6.Spelling and Grammar (/25)

7.Story's Flow (/10)

8.Overall Enjoyment (/10)

 Total: /100

♔ Assigned Reviews ♔

midnight-cookie | Butterfly love

midnight-cookie | The Rejector

KyungAe | My Lovely Baby Daughter

LynZy_G | I Love You Too Late

PrincessHades | Love and Dreams

anne197 | Sixty Days to Remember

crazygurl | The Truth, The Lies, and The Love

Kim_Hanyu | Dance with me

GreemGardenPop | Silent Night

evilmagnae | remember me, dara

Parksohee | My 2 kingkas

ThatOneOtherWriter | Hohoemi 

Khun_Toria | Enemies Forever Or Lovers Forever?

TheMasquerade | Talking to Heebum

Also, thank you  ★ x i a o l u  for this awesome poster ;)

 

 

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TheChuglyOne #1
Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I'm cancelling my review request ^^
But, I changed my username sometime ago. It used to be anne197 ^_-
AddictedtoKpop19 #2
Chapter 1: I don't know If I informed you before but I cant be a reviewer anymore.. but I'm still on the staff list
kkam-nol #3
Story’s title: How to Save a Life

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/408791/s-angst-death-hanchul-heechul-superjunior-hangeng

Characters: Heechul, Hangeng

Genre: Angst

Status: Completed (two-shot)

Reviewer: TheAsianNoob

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck
aeterniti #4
Story’s title: The Inferno's Kiss

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/403102/the-inferno-s-kiss-angst-gore-horror-psychological-bap-daehyun-contestentry

Characters: Daehyun, Mieun (OC)

Genre: Horror, Gore, Psychological

Status: (On-going/completed/one shot): completed.

Reviewer: --eagle_tamer or threecheers

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck.

But I really do like blueberry muffins. :)
KpopCandice #5
Story’s title:When I Lived with Mr Popular

Story’s link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/339705

Characters:Lee Ji Eun(IU), Choi Minho

Genre:Sweet, Romance, SchoolLife

Status: (On-going/completed/one shot):On Going

Reviewer:TheAsianNoob or anybody awesomeXD

Password:blueberrymuffinssuck




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parklunatic #6
Story’s title: Rushing Blood

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/400818/rushing-blood-fantasy-secret-supernatural-violence-you-zelo-bap

Characters: B.A.P, SECRET, Yoshi(oc/you), others

Genre: violence, super natural, fantasy

Status: on going

Reviewer: MessyBuns

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck
anne-maschera #7
Story’s title: Danger Zone

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/375855/

Characters: Simon and Inati (DMTN), Yoo Miran (OC)

Genre: Slice of life, romance

Status: Completed (total 8 chapters)

Reviewer: TheAsianNoob or anyone available

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck

Thank you :)
caramelfrappucino #8
Story’s title: The man who stayed

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/397611/the-man-who-stayed-angst-oneshot-exo-exom-luhan

Characters: EXO-M Luhan and OC (mainly Luhan)

Genre: angst(?)

Status: one shot

Reviewer: Anyone available - I don't mind :)

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck

Note - I'm not particularly very pleased with this one shot, but I would like someone's opinion on it and some advice to help improve my writing. I'm still quite an amateur and I really want to improve. :)
XiuMini #9
Story’s title: A Friend of a Fiend

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/420887/a-friend-of-a-fiend-action-angst-friendship-romance-you-originalcharacter-zombie

Characters: OC/Reader, Hunter (??? -to be determined), cameos of other idols

Genre: Action, Apocalypse, Angst, Zombies

Status: On-going

Reviewer: kpopandvarietylover

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck

Note: I just started this story very recently so... I'm still working with it and getting to the rising action. So I'm very sorry if it doesn't seem enough to work with yet...? OTL
sakurachuu #10
Story’s title: Stuck With The Black Swan

Story’s link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/409180/

Characters: OC, Daehyun, IU and Youngjae

Genre: romance/drama

Status: (On-going/completed/one shot): On-going

Reviewer: PreciousSerenity

Password: blueberrymuffinssuck

Note: I said drama but I haven't reached the drama part yet but I really think I need a review of this now. I'm not sure how I'm doing in my first fic. If ever, can I ask you to review this again for me in the future? Maybe, when I ended it?
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