Impressions of the Heart

Description

Hello lovelies~ first time writing a oneshot :) do leave comments I really want to improve, any feedback is welcome! ^^

Foreword

The pain. It hurt so bad like there was a hole punched through his chest. He couldn't breath, his vision was blurred. He was gulping for air like a fish out of water, and was barely aware of his hyung's faint voice in the background, calling him back to reality. The world he wanted to leave behind.
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Kpopgirl808 #1
Chapter 1: Omg this was so great and sad! It made me cry! The worst part was I was reading it in the car and everyone looked at me weirdly cuz I was crying XD
-xhotchocolate #2
Chapter 1: Yeah it's been forever,
But wow. This is great!
Even though it's a month old now~

"I love you too."
What a lovely ending! ♥
zerothreethirty #3
Chapter 1: oh my god i
-xhotchocolate #4
Wow this sounds great so far!!
And duh it's chunji! <3

Can't wait for an update, I don't usually read angst stories or oneshots, but the forward sounds good. xx :)
ArryTYE #5
Where's mesas poster?
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