Failure

Description

Yongguk and Youngjae tragic fan fic, ideas taken from the one shot mv

Foreword

Yongguk drowns himself in misery as he remembers the memories of Youngjae, realizing how much he meant to him.

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I don't write stories that often, so my writing isn't the best, but I'd appreciate comments etc etc. Thank you for reading! 

 

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Hurricane-Venus #1
Chapter 1: Oh my feels... ;_;
adexios
#2
Chapter 1: I love how you write it from Yongguk's own point of view and not 3rd person. that way I can feel his sadness and guilt better and it's really breaking my heart ): and the little bit of daejae that you inserted there is just- /cries/ great job and thank you for writing this beautiful piece of work :')
StarMagician
#3
Chapter 1: (╥﹏╥) this is so sad.... I can feel the emotion that Yongguk felt..
Losing Youngjae like that must be really painful... *sobs*
If its okay with you, can I request a one shot/chaptered fic of the rest b.a.p`s members reaction on Youngjae`s death???? that will be awesome..
Loving the ninja!daejae in here too..
YuyaLoveB
#4
Chapter 1: ouh my..
be strong Gukkie...
this shot somehow remind me of one of their track = COMA..

can i ask for a one shot too??
obliviate-
#5
Chapter 1: So sad ;; Poor Yongguk
kpopfan3
#6
This just so...asdfflgglhl I love it ^^