Saturdays

Description

9 year old Hongbin is playing in his first Soccer game and Leo really doesn't like Saturdays.

Foreword

Hiya~! I wrote this thing and fair warning, it's quite different than my other VIXX fics. So much lighter.

I saw this: http://first-stariseetonight.tumblr.com/post/42352690214/vixxs-support-for-hongbin-at-mbc-idol-star

and this: http://first-stariseetonight.tumblr.com/post/42399014491

and I just got hit with a ton of VIXX feels. And I thought "this is like if VIXX were a family and they're going to one of Hongbin's sports games and Leo hates when Kenjumma comes to visit" and then idk I couldn't not write it.

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devils_solitude #1
Chapter 1: I think this can be considered as fluff! Just a simple narrative about the VIXX family's day feels comfortable enough, and you can pick out the dynamics in the group (at least for the adults) through their small interactions. I really like how you chose to omit explicit dialogue here, choosing to rely purely on the narrative to highlight the relationships and to move the plot forward. The result is a smoother overall flow, and a story that is both light and easy to digest. Also, brilliant ending line! Really makes the whole story go a full circle! (Poor Taekwoon will never catch a break with Jaehwan around~) Lovely work as usual!
bioward #2
Chapter 1: OMG THIS THE CUTEST THING EVER! Please make this a series, it would be adorable! You could write all the way from their childhood to when they graduate IT WOULD BE FABULOUS
lemoncandygirl #3
Chapter 1: I agree with aznbunnie! You should make it into a series! :D
Yunawchan #4
Chapter 1: I love your writing this was soooooo cute absolutely adorable ! ;________; All the feels I'm getting at one in the morning ugh
butterscotchaa #5
Chapter 1: Hjkadfgghaaa I love it so much please write more! >w<
aznbunnie #6
Chapter 1: We need this to be a series omg. WRITE OT GUUUUURL. CAN YOU IMAGINE THE FEELS. DUDE APPA LEO TO THE RESCUE. FRIKKEN PLAYGROUND FIGHTS AND STUFF ECT. Yeaaaah even thou I ship Keo I couldn't see anyone other than N being the umma. Ken can just be the love able eccentric Kenjumma. Hasjlfsadhkzgk SEEQUEL PLEASE.
b1a4bana4ever #7
Chapter 1: Lol stupid ken! This was cute,,,,,,, BUT their should be either a sequel or a totally diff story bout ravi and n. Ravi is a bad boy in school while N is just that new kid that everyone seems to love! And then they meet and fall in love!!!<3
kk_soshi #8
Chapter 1: this is so adorable!
'kenjumma' haha~
cookiiLovely #9
Chapter 1: OMG! That was so cute! and the end was so Ken XDD loved it!
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